It's really nice. I think it would make a great love song, not to sound cheezy. Some poems don't make good songs, but I think this would be a cool one with an acoustic guitar.
Idk if you meant to leave it out, but every time the "cause" line comes there's no I before the am. If you meant to leave it out, that's cool, just thought I would let u know.
LovelyRisa
Otaku Eternal | Posted 03/27/10 | Reply
It's really nice. I think it would make a great love song, not to sound cheezy. Some poems don't make good songs, but I think this would be a cool one with an acoustic guitar.
Idk if you meant to leave it out, but every time the "cause" line comes there's no I before the am. If you meant to leave it out, that's cool, just thought I would let u know.