Back again (sorry) I reread yours and you're on the right track. It just needs to be told from a first person standpoint as if that person is having a flashback, memory of sorts. Other than that you're on the right track
One more thing if you happen to get stuck on how to go about it, since I've done this before there are those who have entered who are entering again. One person whose past entry you can check out is BB-chan. If you don't know who that is it is beloved blood. It's on the Beloved bloody words world. That should help give you a better understanding on how to go about this. But if you have a way of doing it that is fine as well! Take care!
Oh Good I'm glad you're not upset and take it as a challenge I like that!! That's def. the mark of an artist in their truest form!! Can't wait to see how you do it!! I look forward to it!
That's what I like to hear!! I love to write so I'll keep creating and entering writing challenges as well! I've done some and I always have fun.
And I forgot to tell you that It's only supposed to be in first person narrative. You can only have one character. I'm sorry I feel really bad because I didn't notice it until now that you have more than one speaking. I really like your story and I don't want you to change it, but you can only have one character. You can mention other characters, but only one person tells the story. Sorry again I don't want to deter you from entering.
But you can enter as many times as you like!! So if you've got something else by all means please enter it!! Or if you are willing to change your story a bit by taking out the speaking parts by other characters and have only one character that you like narrate then that would be good. Again and again I am terribly sorry. I do hope this doesn't keep you from entering.
This is one of my quick challenge stories so I might finish it if I get interested in it again. It was kinda hard to find out where to insert the line though and I ended up going with the dinosaur. I'll join a writing challenge anytime. Its What I love.
Wow! Now I'm wondering what's going to happen next! I really like it and I'm very happy with your story!! It starts off vague and mysterious and gives a feel that something big is going to happen. But it's not cliche and that is wonderful!! It's very creative as well. I like Shay and the dinosaur and I understood when you added the line. I will say you only have a few grammatical errors and that is about it. So good job!! And thank you so much for entering my challenge!!!
phantomgirl21
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/12 | Reply
Back again (sorry) I reread yours and you're on the right track. It just needs to be told from a first person standpoint as if that person is having a flashback, memory of sorts. Other than that you're on the right track
phantomgirl21
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/11/12 | Reply
One more thing if you happen to get stuck on how to go about it, since I've done this before there are those who have entered who are entering again. One person whose past entry you can check out is BB-chan. If you don't know who that is it is beloved blood. It's on the Beloved bloody words world. That should help give you a better understanding on how to go about this. But if you have a way of doing it that is fine as well! Take care!
phantomgirl21
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/09/12 | Reply
@FaithlessFighter:
Oh Good I'm glad you're not upset and take it as a challenge I like that!! That's def. the mark of an artist in their truest form!!
Can't wait to see how you do it!! I look forward to it!
FaithlessFighter
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/09/12 | Reply
@phantomgirl21:
Ah I love a good plot twist. I can do the whole thing over
phantomgirl21
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/08/12 | Reply
@FaithlessFighter:
That's what I like to hear!! I love to write so I'll keep creating and entering writing challenges as well! I've done some and I always have fun.
And I forgot to tell you that It's only supposed to be in first person narrative. You can only have one character. I'm sorry I feel really bad because I didn't notice it until now that you have more than one speaking. I really like your story and I don't want you to change it, but you can only have one character. You can mention other characters, but only one person tells the story. Sorry again I don't want to deter you from entering.
But you can enter as many times as you like!! So if you've got something else by all means please enter it!! Or if you are willing to change your story a bit by taking out the speaking parts by other characters and have only one character that you like narrate then that would be good. Again and again I am terribly sorry. I do hope this doesn't keep you from entering.
FaithlessFighter
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/08/12 | Reply
@phantomgirl21:
This is one of my quick challenge stories so I might finish it if I get interested in it again. It was kinda hard to find out where to insert the line though and I ended up going with the dinosaur. I'll join a writing challenge anytime. Its What I love.
phantomgirl21
Otaku Legend | Posted 01/08/12 | Reply
Wow! Now I'm wondering what's going to happen next! I really like it and I'm very happy with your story!! It starts off vague and mysterious and gives a feel that something big is going to happen. But it's not cliche and that is wonderful!! It's very creative as well. I like Shay and the dinosaur and I understood when you added the line. I will say you only have a few grammatical errors and that is about it. So good job!! And thank you so much for entering my challenge!!!