well, i think its not too long to just be 1 chapter.
i think its length is good, not too long to get bored and not too short. but if you say 2 chapters, i think its quite short and the story is concentrating on one point.
(that's my idea, sorry if its bad)
a new world filled with roses.
so this is the 2nd chapter already? (i thought it is still chapter 1).
that's fast.
waiting patiently~~~ do your best~~~ cheering for you~~~
CheyCheyRawr
Grand Otaku | Posted 12/04/09 | Reply
@gem2archery:
No its a good idea I just couldn't really tell if it was to long or not
gem2archery
Otakuite+ | Posted 12/03/09 | Reply
@CheyCheyRawr:
well, i think its not too long to just be 1 chapter.
i think its length is good, not too long to get bored and not too short. but if you say 2 chapters, i think its quite short and the story is concentrating on one point.
(that's my idea, sorry if its bad)
CheyCheyRawr
Grand Otaku | Posted 12/03/09 | Reply
@gem2archery:
Well I couldnt figure out if it was to long to just be chapter 1 so I just put chapter 1/ chapter 2.......idk should It be 2 chapters or just one?
gem2archery
Otakuite+ | Posted 12/02/09 | Reply
a new world filled with roses.
so this is the 2nd chapter already? (i thought it is still chapter 1).
that's fast.
waiting patiently~~~ do your best~~~ cheering for you~~~