awwww~ Winry watchin the HOT Ed sleepin...lol it kinda makes her look like a stalker a bit, but other than that....THIS IS SOOOOO CUTE!!..I'm like..smiling all the way reading this story
Aww, that was cute. It totally fit them, too. I'm writing a fanfic on them...it's in the process...but it's not as good as this! Keep it up, can't wait to see what you write next!!
I loved it, it was a good change of pace from the anime/manga where not only is it only shown from Ed/Al's perspective, but it doesnt really elaborate on Winry's feelings
dlyreil
Otakuite | Posted 05/04/10 | Reply
is the story done??i so love it!!!
wolfee1005
Otakuite+ | Posted 05/12/09 | Reply
Good! Great story. I love it.
al76259
Otakuite+ | Posted 04/23/09 | Reply
it is a good story
ChibiEdoGirl
Senior Otaku | Posted 03/22/09 | Reply
Nice! I love this. I laughed so hard when she's like, "I get it, ur gay!" lol Your a great writer!
mello0705
Otakuite | Posted 03/06/09 | Reply
awwww~ Winry watchin the HOT Ed sleepin...lol it kinda makes her look like a stalker a bit
, but other than that....THIS IS SOOOOO CUTE!!..I'm like..smiling all the way reading this story
Emptybrain
Otakuite | Posted 02/27/09 | Reply
Wow, good work! :-))))) Reading that fanfic is really, really, really cool!!!!!!
cherrichan13
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 02/16/09 | Reply
Aww, that was cute. It totally fit them, too. I'm writing a fanfic on them...it's in the process...but it's not as good as this! Keep it up, can't wait to see what you write next!!
naturally morbid
Otakuite | Posted 01/11/09 | Reply
Awww this was very cute ^_^
Kyubi Elric
The Waffle (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/28/08 | Reply
kuro95
Otakuite++ | Posted 09/02/08 | Reply
woa.. all of it is very nice words..
i agree wif u..Ed wasn't gay..
sasoriforever
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/05/08 | Reply
CUTE veary veary CUTE
wright more or make more stories like this or do both 
~Pucca-Chan
shizuka101
Otaku Legend | Posted 03/31/08 | Reply
queenB1
Otaku Legend | Posted 03/20/08 | Reply
rofl!! crazy fan-girl stalker! but that was a really good story i'm like, n luff wit it!!
...i think that i'm gana go and bake meh self a choco-cake ^.^
soulphilosopher
Otakuite | Posted 03/19/08 | Reply
I loved it, it was a good change of pace from the anime/manga where not only is it only shown from Ed/Al's perspective, but it doesnt really elaborate on Winry's feelings
CrowCrow
Otakuite | Posted 03/13/08 | Reply
Cute ^_^ I loved reading this!!
SAKiiSTaR
Otakuite | Posted 03/13/08 | Reply
AWWWw i lovedd itt. =(^-^)= soo cuteeee
otakudogg
Otakuite | Posted 03/10/08 | Reply
haha that was cute!!! great job!
just.me
DragonGirl (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 03/10/08 | Reply
Aww cute :P Very nice work! I enjoyed reading it ;)