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....ray guns!!

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Hot sause might work!D= Burritos....mmmm

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I think i super soaker is a good match up!!D= and they are too smart for bombs in pies!X3

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Well those negatice voices have a water gun and love pie so what do i do then?X3

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I think its just because things dont come out the way i imagined them to be or i have an idea but have trouble putting them on paper.

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It is hard><
Well im glad i could help ya outXD I have to draw it in the american way because drawing it the japanese way for some reason confuses me><
Im not so much worried as annoyed with my art for some reason.

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Oh so if i tell everyone up front its read right to left would that be easier?XD Sometimes when im drawing its hard for me to keep things in a go right then back to the left then down thing. It makes it even harder when one of the panels is waaay larger><

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i dont mind for critisism because im askingXD
What about them is confusing XD if the art and plot are good and the panels dont need much work what is confusing?XD