@TheAngelRaine:

Yupp! Totally Original!

@TheAngelRaine:

yeah. It looked weird when she didn't.

@XxAznSkillZXx:

does she have pupils?X3

@TheAngelRaine:

Yeah but nobody will notice because its shaded.

@XxAznSkillZXx:

i suck at drawin jutsus.X3 i think ull do fine.X3
....oh i see...does she have red eyes in ur comic?

@TheAngelRaine:

I suck at drawing some jutsus and I do not know how to draw a byakugan because Mitsu does not have Hyuga eyes.

@XxAznSkillZXx:

y would it look terrible if you did?<=)

@Naomi Bear:

Cool^^
So its a original story?=3

@TheAngelRaine:

lol I ment days. I hate it when I type something wrong. I am just going to go with the flow with it...hopefully it will turn out good. If I did do byakugan which I might it would look terrible or it would end up with a different story line.

@TheAngelRaine:

It's called "A Promise Worth Keeping...".
It's about this boy and a girl. I'll post up the details later!

@XxAznSkillZXx:

I actualy kinda wanted you to go for byakugan, cuz a lot of ocs have it, you know, another last serviving clan member.....well that makes me feel bad with rei but i guess she isnt really an uchiha so i thought it would be ok.X3
(yay getting hints on wats going to happen.XD)
I dont think you should make her but recovering for mounths, well not always maybe once cuz it seems a little unrealistic.
And i think you should find a medium between being a god and just barely making it.

@TheAngelRaine:

Yeah I was thinking about that too. *flips a coin* I guess its the Sharingan. I wanted it to be Byakugan though. No need to worry about that. I wasn't planning on her to fight yet. Maybe in the third chapter but Kiki and Daisuke does fight while Mitsuki says the strategy. Mitsu will probably win but pass out and will have to recover over the months. It is sorta sueish isn't it?

@XxAznSkillZXx:

Im glad you think that way.^^ im doing my best not to make her sue.^^
Ok....one thing about mitsuki thats a little ify to me is that she can use both sharingan and byuakugan, i think thats a little pushing it.
And when drawing fight sceens dont make it always so one sided towards mitsu....
she can be strong but not win all the time.
Raine will end up loosing...like most of the time..wowOo

@TheAngelRaine:

okay I will tell you. So far it isn't sueish because the fighting scene Raine got hit with attacks and she is not blushy blushy kissy face over Lee. Well can tell me if my comic is sueish? Mitsuki doesn't like anyone but still with being abnormally strong,fighting scenes, things like that.

@Naomi Bear:

which story!!T^T

@TheAngelRaine:

oh I see... I'll try!

@Naomi Bear:

Ah dont worry about it, it wont^^
I promise.^^'
Ur making a comic?!
Which one?X3

Oh advive for a non sue story, dont make ur female oc totally in love with the guy and the guy in love with her in like the first few chapters.X3
.....raine is not 'in love' with lee.X3

@TheAngelRaine:

Is my upcoming comic going to piss you off? T^T

@Naomi Bear:

what? no im not going to laugh at you!

... You're gonna laugh at me???

@XxAznSkillZXx:

I cant say im not a little mean, cuz i make fun of them with my friends. I dont tell the person to their face, but its still mean.
If im not mean ur not mean luna.X3
And ud tell me if my stories are sue would you?X3

...I sorta do that too....I find them amusing so I guess I am mean too. But you Raine are nice so you aren't mean.