hi there!
i absolutely love this series! i don't know how u people come up with this stuff! ur a total genius! and adding Kurama's siblings in there...bravo!
oh! by the way, i'm Haine. love ur work!
l8r!
The format is play-format, I felt readers would be more familiar with it than screenplay format...that and formating for screenplay on TheO would be murder and a killer XD If you have any suggestions for a better format style you may present them ^^
so far so good, i love kuwabara's thoughts on yusuke and kurama being fathers, i must say that the episode format is a bit hard to read (not as in i don't understand it, but it makes the flow a bit...choppier? i'm not sure if that's the word...) but other than that the grammar is great and the word usage is superb as well. i'm only on episode three as of right now, but i'll finish it up as soon as possible!!
HaineOtomiya21011
Otakuite | Posted 09/14/09 | Reply
hi there!
i absolutely love this series! i don't know how u people come up with this stuff! ur a total genius! and adding Kurama's siblings in there...bravo!
oh! by the way, i'm Haine. love ur work!
l8r!
Xxbigmomma
Otakuite | Posted 06/08/09 | Reply
i <3 yu yu hakusho
theartbook35
Otakuite | Posted 05/27/09 | Reply
You got Kuwabara's character down perfectly, it's so funny!
tiggerola
Weaver of Dreams (Otaku Angel) | Posted 09/17/08 | Reply
@haseo luver92:
Glad you enjoy it so far ^_^
The format is play-format, I felt readers would be more familiar with it than screenplay format...that and formating for screenplay on TheO would be murder and a killer XD If you have any suggestions for a better format style you may present them ^^
haseo luver92
Otaku Legend | Posted 09/14/08 | Reply
so far so good, i love kuwabara's thoughts on yusuke and kurama being fathers, i must say that the episode format is a bit hard to read (not as in i don't understand it, but it makes the flow a bit...choppier? i'm not sure if that's the word...) but other than that the grammar is great and the word usage is superb as well. i'm only on episode three as of right now, but i'll finish it up as soon as possible!!
haseo