Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/28/09 | Reply
Seems to me like a pretty good report, you did your research well! lol^^ I hope you'll get a good grade for this^^
(Eheh, I'm so bad at criticism...DX I couldn't tell you what you could've done better like the other two did, I didn't see anything except some grammatical mistakes...^^; I always tend to see those, as well as spelling mistakes._.) Anyways, nice job:) lol
Wow, that was good! That was very nicely written, though sometimes you could have explained things more thoroughly... not to be mean or anything!
Oh and about how libraries are adding it to their shelves, that is so true. I'm suprised that my library system has a nice collection, and the middle school has some volumes, not the high school though . They even sold Naruto at our book fair. That was kinda funny, seeing how popular manga has gotten. Some people still refer to them as "those backwards books", but a good amount of people are actually taking an interest. We're converting them one at a time! Muahahah! *ahem*, sorry...
Yes, manga is taking over, and there ain't nothin' they can do!
Ahah. I have no life. I read the essay thingy you did and it was like, pretty decent.
Ehh...I'mabad critic,plushavingnoexperienceingivingcomments andcritiqueaboutthingmakesmeevenworselol.
Ithinktheendingsentencecould'vebeenmadebetter.
Thelastsentenceactuallycouldbemovedtosomewhereinoneofthe earlierparagraphssinceitwasalreadystatedthatmangaistaking oversotherereallyisn'taneedforitattheend.
Err...Maybeaddinafewmoretidbitsonmangaonanimebesidesthe factthatit'sabiginfluenceintheentertainmentarea.Like give examplesofhowit'saffectingAmericans.DoAmericanshaveastronger urgetolearnaboutthelanguageorthewholeculture?HowismanganadanimeinfluencingotherculturesbesidesthoseoftheUS?Anyexamplesoffamousmangaandanimecreators?
Ahah...I actually have a bit more to say but I think it's about time I just shut up and go to sleep.
Have a nice day Aki-chan~
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/28/09 | Reply
Seems to me like a pretty good report, you did your research well!
lol^^ I hope you'll get a good grade for this^^
(Eheh, I'm so bad at criticism...DX I couldn't tell you what you could've done better like the other two did, I didn't see anything except some grammatical mistakes...^^; I always tend to see those, as well as spelling mistakes._.) Anyways, nice job:) lol
Take care Aki-chan^^ *hugs*
~S.G~
Gaijin otome
Otakuite++ | Posted 04/16/09 | Reply
Wow, that was good! That was very nicely written,
though sometimes you could have explained things more thoroughly...not to be mean or anything!Oh and about how libraries are adding it to their shelves, that is so true. I'm suprised that my library system has a nice collection, and the middle school has some volumes, not the high school though
. They even sold Naruto at our book fair. That was kinda funny, seeing how popular manga has gotten. Some people still refer to them as "those backwards books", but a good amount of people are actually taking an interest. We're converting them one at a time! Muahahah! *ahem*, sorry...
Yes, manga is taking over, and there ain't nothin' they can do!
LunaLei
Otaku Legend | Posted 04/14/09 | Reply
Ahah. I have no life. I read the essay thingy you did and it was like, pretty decent.
Ehh...I'mabad critic,plushavingnoexperienceingivingcomments andcritiqueaboutthingmakesmeevenworselol.
Ithinktheendingsentencecould'vebeenmadebetter.
Thelastsentenceactuallycouldbemovedtosomewhereinoneofthe earlierparagraphssinceitwasalreadystatedthatmangaistaking oversotherereallyisn'taneedforitattheend.
Err...Maybeaddinafewmoretidbitsonmangaonanimebesidesthe factthatit'sabiginfluenceintheentertainmentarea.Like give examplesofhowit'saffectingAmericans.DoAmericanshaveastronger urgetolearnaboutthelanguageorthewholeculture?HowismanganadanimeinfluencingotherculturesbesidesthoseoftheUS?Anyexamplesoffamousmangaandanimecreators?
Ahah...I actually have a bit more to say but I think it's about time I just shut up and go to sleep.
Have a nice day Aki-chan~