@reirei18 :

wat makes me wanna play something? - im a sucker for good looking characters and ones that look like they're rpg =D
im a simple person

im pretty sure i commented - but it never showed! gahhhh
and i typed so much too T^T

anyways - shortcut now then. my rating 2/5
the review needs more oomp. needs to have something that show wat type of game it is and target audience.
the descriptions are too specific and makes it boring. eg "played by two teams with a max...." sounds more interesting if said like this "players can team up with friends in and up to four man cells against others in a ......"

meh -wat i said in the first sounded better - but i forgot it ^^'

like here's an example of a game review
Prison life is difficult to emulate within the realm of video games. Because you always have the choice to turn off a torturous game and move on to something more fulfilling, the feeling of being locked away in a suffocating cell with no hope for freedom is hard to accurately convey through digital media. However, Prison Break: The Conspiracy does an admirable job of making every moment within its world mimic the utter hopelessness one must feel when trapped behind bars. This claustrophobic reenactment of the now-defunct television series never even reaches the level of tolerable. There's no reprieve from the boring fist fights and tedious stealth missions that constantly assault you throughout these eight-hours of grueling monotony. The story may appeal to fans of the series who long to interact with virtual representations of their favorite characters, but even the most ardent Prison Break fanatic should stay far away from The Conspiracy.

prob a good idea to read through some. hope that helps