@littlepooch:

Yeah. And just because you know people who are 'mature enough to handle it', it doesn't mean everyone on the site is mature enough.:/
I mean...Fine to have a couple, but jeez people! Not every person under the sun wants to do that dirty stuff!

@Eiri Yuki s Lover:

^^ You don't have to, it's just what I would do if it was my world XDD Yeah, I don't like having other people do the story so far either >__> I guess it works too if you always know what's going on in your world and can easily tell people XD

@Pikmin541:

I agree. I mean, they'res no real way to tell how old someone is. It's pretty easy to lie about your age on the internet. Like, last year I think I talked to a 12 year old, and two who were 11... >__>

@littlepooch:

ok ill change them back then ^^ and idk about a story so far...i think i would fail at that. i couldn't even keep up with points -_-' and i will not ask someone else to do it. that would be unfair in my mind. its my world so it's not their responsibility. hmmm ill think about it though. thank you Poochy ^^

@littlepooch:

Yeah. I mean it's perfectly fine to have a couple, but not your posting being ALL about the couple.:/ and It's fine up until you break the own Otaku rules. People really need to cut down a lot on that, because kids who just get on here can be 12, even when they're supposed to be 13. And even if they're 13 they don't need to read that stuff, it makes them start thinking that's what love is really about; Just looks and how good you are in bed. But that's not what it's about at all.:/

@ChiyukiChan:

:D Yup! Out of the four or eight episodes I saw! *shot* XD;;

@Eiri Yuki s Lover:

Cool! I like the changes you made :D I just found one thing with the links ^^; The members link goes to the profile and I think it would help to keep the members in the intro so people know who the members are and who their OCs are, especially if they have more than one.

For The Pack.. I like the changes you made ^^ And like I said, maybe keeping the members in the intro and when you link the profiles like...

Example on what I'm trying to explain XD;

me- Ai-Ame -Saiai <-so thats where you would link the profiles, by the person's name. It could help in making it shorter~ Also, since The Pack has been going on awhile, possibly starting up a Story So Far...? (like you could start a new one with each plot.)

@littlepooch:

XD
So, is it good? :3

@ChiyukiChan:

YOU SHOULD WATCH IT THANNNNNNNN!!! :/ It's okay. Not a very well known anime. (Not sure if it's a manga..)

@Pikmin541:

:/ Yeah, a rp that I used to be apart of has a lot of that lovey dovey talk in it and half the reason I quit -.-; And slightly inappropriate parts.. Gezz I don't need to read that...

And I know some people can get kind of touchy about worlds that allow it ^^;

:D Thanks for reading the review~

Thanks Poochy ^^ I'll work on the improvements! Do u hav any suggestions for The Pack as well? Ive been thinking about changing the intro cause its a lil long so other than that I would love to hear suggestions ^^

Sounds neat! :D
Never seen Darker Than Black, though. D:

SOme clubs don't allow it because of how a lot of people only talk about their couples or something.>>; or they do not want people to get angry about it.
Sounds like a neat RP!:D