Wow, that's awesome too, and very deep. I loved the slight rhyming, and I also liked the fact that this could be considered either a song like you said, or even a prose poem because of the paragraph-look. (Then again, songs are poems so it works either way.)
I love it, and keep on writing.
Ryo or Demon
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/15/11 | Reply
@Kaijin89:
Thank you ^^ Turned out better tha I thought it would considering how fast I did it
Kaijin89
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/15/11 | Reply
Wow, that's awesome too, and very deep. I loved the slight rhyming, and I also liked the fact that this could be considered either a song like you said, or even a prose poem because of the paragraph-look. (Then again, songs are poems so it works either way.)
I love it, and keep on writing.