Glad to see you writing again! Khavi sounds so cute ^^

@thelostsindar:

Thanks for reading ^^ I have a few ideas knocking around, so we'll see what happens...

@Angel Zakuro:

Thanks for commenting ^^ I'm pleased you think I'm off to a good start. I showed my sister and she liked it too ^^ which was encouraging as she spends a LOT of her time writing her books. Not that she shows me any of her work >.> she wants to wait until she is happy with everything. Fair enough I suppose. I told her how much you'd written too, she sounded impressed! Aha, and here I am, with a couple thousand words XD ahaha.

Anyway, thanks for reading *hugs* and I'm glad you like the names. I think I copy-pasted the U from somewhere. I know there is a way to type it but I don't know how! XD

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Thanks so much for commenting! ^^ I'm happy that people seem to like what I've written so far. *hugs*

I think I need to write more about the background of the story, explain some of the history etc, but I have an idea of how to do that hehe. My chapters are still rather short... I think I'll write some more and re-organise this a little ^^

Oh, a seed cake is a real thing! I think I must have read about them somewhere, but here is some more info I found [link] there is a modern recipe interpretation at the bottom there, but I mentioned these in the story as it is more historically accurate. I wanted to find an old type of food that people would have made hundreds of years ago, as my story has a more historical setting. Sort of. Although it is all made up.

"Caraway seeds are its key ingredient. They are native to Europe and seed-cake is an old English recipe with sweet, bread-like versions dating back to the sixteenth century."

Sorry, I'm rambling XD

Thanks again for drawing Vaek for me <3

@Kaerlyn:

OH I noticed that... or at least, I saw you typed Brannel... and I like BranNel as well :D

@MangaKid:

I'm so, so happy you enjoyed it ^^ I realised I had mis-typed Branel's name a few times XD added an extra 'n' there... I'm not sure if I prefer Brannel or Branel... I may change it back to Brannel XD

@Kaerlyn:

Teehee ^_^ Im so hyped that I was one of the first to read it haha! I really enjoyed every part of it, and I'll let u know if I ever encounter something that you could change, but seriously... you are really talented!! I love Vaek's story so far ;)

AH thats ok!! No pressure at all, I totally understand that you have to wait for inspiration :)
No problem, it was my pleasure <3

Wow, these first pages are so good, Anna! Interesting start being with the birth of Vaek. I love the creativity with the names...the names of the charas and of the Humi (I don't know how to get the accent you did on the 'u' lol). Very nice indeed~ I hope you write more!!

I'll have to read this later. :) But I'm proud of you posting some!! This is awesome! You sound like me. XD Never writing a story before and then going ahead like this...begging for kind words. Haha. Don't worry, we're all nice people here lol. *hugs* I'm sure it's quite good, Anna!! And you'll probably have more readers than my story...since my story seems a bit harsh for SOME people *cough*you*cough* Lolol. XD But it is a good feeling to get support for what we do, even if it is just being done for fun. It starts with an idea for an OC...which is what happened to me lol.

I wish you the best in writing more! And I'll read this when I can.

Ooh, this is super interesting so far! The discussion about the darkening and Vaek’s Húmi features really pulled me right in. I love Vaek already! So glad you posted this and I hope you’ll continue writing! ^^

@MangaKid:

Goodness I wasn't expecting anyone to have read it so fast! Thanks for the feedback ^^ you are so sweet! *blushes* I am so happy you enjoyed it! Feel free to point out anything you feel could be improved ^^

I'm afraid you may have to wait a long while for the next update XD it depends on when the mood to write strikes. We shall see... I have a few ideas for different segments of my story, but haven't worked out how to pull it together yet.

Thanks so much for taking the time to read it ^^ I know it isn't a long read, but I do appreciate it.

Ok, this was awesome. BEST story I have read from a friend or online... I really hope you continue! this story is going to stick in my head for a while, its so intriguing! ashjfdkla I'm so happy you posted it, Anna! I wanna be ur #1 fan hahahaha xD You are a brilliant writer!!!! Keep it up :D
PS sorry for the spam, im just so excited!!

I read the first two pages and... this is the best fanfic I've read (Im saying the word fanfic but I guess I mean fiction written by someone who isn't an official author yet).. And if you aren't an author, then become one!!! 8D You are an amazing writer with so much talent, Anna! I barely saw any loopholes or any annoying hooks that deterred me when reading, it was really smooth and naturally written! I really love it so far... I can't believe you weren't sure about ur skill in writing xD haha!! Its just awesome!

YAY!!!! you posted it!!!!!!!!!
.. ok just read the first paragraph and it was seriously awesome, and hooked me right away *U* I am gonna LOVE this!!! *continues reading*
Oh I will comment again when I can after I read the full post!