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    shortcrazygirl

    Otakuite+ | Posted 02/26/14 | Reply

    @DemonsandAngels:

    Well, I'll see if I can fix that later tonight.

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    Beautiful Disaster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/26/14 | Reply

    My biggest suggestion is to put in spacings and paragraphs. This was so hard to read. I've never seen Dr Who, so I don't know much else about it. But more detail never hurts!