So I like this idea of the story where there's a yet-undescribed procedure that has become widely practiced, culturally, and that there are a few who are resisting and are being told they should comply 'for their own good'. It makes me want to know each character's individual reason for not going along with it, as well as more details on what the procedure is and how it's done, and if their society will shun or punish them for their resistance. I also want to know more about this character's friend, and learn the backstory between them. (Why is it so important to them that they see each other 'with their own eyes'? And how did they get separated?) So yeah, I'd be pretty interested to see where all that went.
There's also the fact that these characters are not exactly human, so it'd be interesting to see how their 'world' works in comparison to our own.
Ooh, one thing, though. In the beginning Olo is wondering "where 'she' is now and what she's doing. Something you could do with that story is put a couple vague memories in before that, giving some idea of who 'she' is, and that backstory could be explained in greater detail later.
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I'd give it a 9 because I really like interactive stories. I also like the concept of these characters resisting something that is being pushed on them 'for their own good'.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
Ah, right. If I could have any power, it would probably be the power to mutate/manipulate my own body. I could grow wings, or adapt to breathing underwater. Or I could get that thing that some animals have where they can detect emotions or physical illness. Or I'd just make my entire self glow.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
The world is overrun by neutral frogs being perceived in a multitude of different ways! Many people appreciate the new lack of bugs, at least until it messes up the entire ecosystem.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
Once my resume builds, it'll be possible. For now, though, I'm not really applying to any "higher-position" jobs (during the school year I'm a cashier)
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/23/15 | Reply
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All right. Good luck with it, if you do decide to do it. And if you did I'd definitely read.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/22/15 | Reply
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Worried why?
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/21/15 | Reply
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Okay!
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/21/15 | Reply
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Because it's interactive?
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/19/15 | Reply
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YAY!!
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/18/15 | Reply
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IZ SORRY
*soul-weaving session commences*
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/18/15 | Reply
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I liked it!!
Only 10 was 'sell your soul to read it' *clings protectively to tattered remains of my soul*
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/17/15 | Reply
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So I like this idea of the story where there's a yet-undescribed procedure that has become widely practiced, culturally, and that there are a few who are resisting and are being told they should comply 'for their own good'. It makes me want to know each character's individual reason for not going along with it, as well as more details on what the procedure is and how it's done, and if their society will shun or punish them for their resistance. I also want to know more about this character's friend, and learn the backstory between them. (Why is it so important to them that they see each other 'with their own eyes'? And how did they get separated?) So yeah, I'd be pretty interested to see where all that went.
There's also the fact that these characters are not exactly human, so it'd be interesting to see how their 'world' works in comparison to our own.
Ooh, one thing, though. In the beginning Olo is wondering "where 'she' is now and what she's doing. Something you could do with that story is put a couple vague memories in before that, giving some idea of who 'she' is, and that backstory could be explained in greater detail later.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/16/15 | Reply
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WHAT HAVE I DONE
*changes it so the story can continue*
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/15/15 | Reply
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*quickly changes it to 11*
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/12/15 | Reply
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I'd give it a 9 because I really like interactive stories. I also like the concept of these characters resisting something that is being pushed on them 'for their own good'.
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Sarasface
Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/10/15 | Reply
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Oh ok.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/10/15 | Reply
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Sorry to hear that. If you ever did continue the story I'd be interested to read it.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/08/15 | Reply
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Nice! Do you have the continuation of the story in mind or are you going to make it up as you go?
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/07/15 | Reply
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Maybe! Wings are so hard to draw though.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/06/15 | Reply
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Ooh, pretty!! }
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/04/15 | Reply
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What color would mine be? }
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/03/15 | Reply
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Yes to both things! "There is no such thing as evo" should be a poster in my room.
What kind of wings do you think I should have? If you were a fairy princess I think you'd have white feathery wings or maybe butterfly ones.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/01/15 | Reply
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I can go along with that plan! (Probably will forget again *facepalms at self*)
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/29/15 | Reply
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Oh right! But do the butterflies secretly wish me harm? Are they luring me in with their prettiness?
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/26/15 | Reply
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Yes, ladybugs or butterflies or moths! (Unless butterflies are secretly evil...
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/18/15 | Reply
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Could I control the electricity? Don't want to zap friendly bugs or other small animals.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/17/15 | Reply
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Oh, that's true. I would not like being swarmed with insects. Maybe I could have some kind of natural insect repellant though.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/16/15 | Reply
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Ah, right. If I could have any power, it would probably be the power to mutate/manipulate my own body. I could grow wings, or adapt to breathing underwater. Or I could get that thing that some animals have where they can detect emotions or physical illness. Or I'd just make my entire self glow.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
Sarasface
Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/15/15 | Reply
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What kind of stuff can they do?
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/14/15 | Reply
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The Light Monger?
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/12/15 | Reply
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The world is overrun by neutral frogs being perceived in a multitude of different ways! Many people appreciate the new lack of bugs, at least until it messes up the entire ecosystem.
Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light.
Sarasface
Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/11/15 | Reply
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Hypno frog uses hypno powers for evil. The world is overrun by frogs.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/15 | Reply
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I wonder how many animals take advantage of the hallucinogenic frogs?
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/07/15 | Reply
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The Mario world is probably trippy enough even without drugs. That video was awesome, though, I had no idea dolphins did that.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/06/15 | Reply
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Yes! Or Mario coins or something! so I can buy mushrooms lol.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/05/15 | Reply
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Once my resume builds, it'll be possible. For now, though, I'm not really applying to any "higher-position" jobs (during the school year I'm a cashier)
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/03/15 | Reply
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I do need to get employed though. At least when the school year is in I'll have a job.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/02/15 | Reply
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Not lying! Just making it sound like the stuff I did was a lot more important than it was. I saw a post on Tumblr that's like
"Worked for a billion dollar corporation' sounds better than 'employee at McDonald's"
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/31/15 | Reply
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I've only ever had one paid job, everything else I put on there is kinda exaggerated.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/30/15 | Reply
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That's me right now. Trying to get hired is a pain.
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Ethereal Wanderer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/30/15 | Reply
@21Emmz12:
RIGHT?
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King of LLamas (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/30/15 | Reply
OH MAN, SO TRUE
Alwayz BELIEVE