Raid Boss (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/02/08 | Reply
Oh, we were supposed to post these on our own page? I did mine in the comments! Anyways, liked it a lot, especially the last paragraph. Really brought a total 180 to the story (good 180). Nice job!
Oh, I love this! You capture the whole suburban sports match atmosphere wonderfully - I've met so many people like Cheryl before. XD And I feel so bad for her son. I can empathize with his embarrassment so much.
I'll post my own response to the prompt later tonight... I got sucked into working on a chapter instead!
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/02/08 | Reply
Like Red and Becky I love this! It truly capture the whole suburban sports and all the Cheryls out there, hehehe...
Great job!
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red tigress
Raid Boss (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/02/08 | Reply
Oh, we were supposed to post these on our own page? I did mine in the comments! Anyways, liked it a lot, especially the last paragraph. Really brought a total 180 to the story (good 180). Nice job!
NightBeck
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/02/08 | Reply
Oh, I love this! You capture the whole suburban sports match atmosphere wonderfully - I've met so many people like Cheryl before. XD And I feel so bad for her son. I can empathize with his embarrassment so much.
I'll post my own response to the prompt later tonight... I got sucked into working on a chapter instead!