this story is really good.thanks for that.hope u post more stories

@kisskiss-bangbang:

absolutly not, lol! dont worry bout it, im not offended in the least, just wanted to make sure we were clear ;)

@kisskiss-bangbang:

:D thanks, i dont mind being called man,

@kisskiss-bangbang:

thanks buddy, i appreciate the wordy reply ^^
just so were clear, i am a girl, lol, tho madison is my name and is in fact a boys name. :D my parents thought it was unique

hey! i like your story, but the grammar is killing me! (no offense! i read some of your other posts and i see thats not a strong point for you, but im picky so dont mind me^^)
anyways, a friend of mine mentioned you or you signed something, i cant remember so i stopped by ^^
*hope to be friends of some kind in the future or maybe not its fine with me*
Madison

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Aden~

@kisskiss-bangbang:

"Green" cheese!? Hehe that sounds even worse than Blue Cheese ^^
Hmm, I liked her ^_^ I though she was well described character-wise, and I liked her visual description. She seemed like a strong character too, and strong slightly reckless characters are more interesting.

Uwaah! That was a good read ^_^ I really enjoyed it. You really are good at writing ^_^ I liked the way you described everything, and your vocabulary is good ^^ I liked the descriptions of the characters too. Good job as always ^_^ I was so pleased when I noticed you'd updated your World, I was hoping it was another story ^_^