I think this is a great prompt! I especially loved the part where you didn't explained why your friend quit. This is an example of life really, since we had a friend who did that.
I'm with SomeGuy - negative attitudes make me sad! Writing for school is different from writing for yourself. *pouts*
Anyways, onto your piece! I could definitely relate to the narrator here; I've had a lot of friends suddenly "quit" on me, without any explanation. I like very much that you left it open-ended rather than trying to explain the friend's behavior, because most of us never know.
Thank you for participating! I hope I see you again! :D
Aww, Crystia's got a negative attitude . . . we need to fix that some time.
I like how you were able to get your story out even in just four paragraphs. Also, I think this kind of disappearance is something we've all seen at some point in life, especially with the online world the way it is now; we all have old friends we wonder about, right?
Aside from the comma errors in the second sentence I have no qualms with this from a mechanical point of view. From a creative, I have absolutely no problems.
Dr. Mama Cat. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
So you've been dragged into the madness! :p I've thought about doing it, but after all the writing I had to do for school... My first thought is No Way In Hell!
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/16/08 | Reply
@Sabrina:
Using your own life experiences and used them to the prompts is such a great idea! As I said before, I really like yours. ^_^
The crazy bubbly shadow
Sabrina
Otaku Archangel | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
@ShadowLight:
Thanks. ^_^ That's where I go the idea actually. From seeing people who look like they quit and yet you really don't know if they did or not.
-Sabrina
ShadowLight
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
I think this is a great prompt! I especially loved the part where you didn't explained why your friend quit. This is an example of life really, since we had a friend who did that.
Good job! ^_^
The crazy bubbly shadow
Rachmaninoff
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/12/08 | Reply
If I wasn't so busy, I'd consider doing that as well. Nice work, especially the open ended aspect of the ending.
-Darren
Aaryanna
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/11/08 | Reply
You did a nice job with the prompt. ^_^ I probably should give it a try too. heh.
~*Aaryanna*~
Sabrina
Otaku Archangel | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
@NightBeck:
Thank you for participating! I hope I see you again! :D
You're welcome! ^_^ And thanks for taking the time to read what I did for the workshop. I'll be watching for more of them.
-Sabrina
Sabrina
Otaku Archangel | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
@SomeGuy:
Aside from the comma errors in the second sentence I have no qualms with this from a mechanical point of view.
I'm always glad to hear about mistakes. >_> I make so many of them! So thanks for pointing that out. ^_^
-Sabrina
Sabrina
Otaku Archangel | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
@Indi:
I've thought about doing it, but after all the writing I had to do for school... My first thought is No Way In Hell!
I figured it would help me be more creative for the rpg's at OB. Heh.
-Sabrina
NightBeck
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
I'm with SomeGuy - negative attitudes make me sad! Writing for school is different from writing for yourself. *pouts*
Anyways, onto your piece! I could definitely relate to the narrator here; I've had a lot of friends suddenly "quit" on me, without any explanation. I like very much that you left it open-ended rather than trying to explain the friend's behavior, because most of us never know.
Thank you for participating! I hope I see you again! :D
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
Aww, Crystia's got a negative attitude . . . we need to fix that some time.
I like how you were able to get your story out even in just four paragraphs. Also, I think this kind of disappearance is something we've all seen at some point in life, especially with the online world the way it is now; we all have old friends we wonder about, right?
Aside from the comma errors in the second sentence I have no qualms with this from a mechanical point of view. From a creative, I have absolutely no problems.
Thanks for playing!
Indi
Dr. Mama Cat. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
So you've been dragged into the madness! :p I've thought about doing it, but after all the writing I had to do for school... My first thought is No Way In Hell!
You did a nice job with the prompt by the way.
~Crystia