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    ShadowLight

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/16/08 | Reply

    @Sabrina:

    Using your own life experiences and used them to the prompts is such a great idea! As I said before, I really like yours. ^_^


    The crazy bubbly shadow

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    Sabrina

    Otaku Archangel | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply

    @ShadowLight:

    Thanks. ^_^ That's where I go the idea actually. From seeing people who look like they quit and yet you really don't know if they did or not.

    -Sabrina

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    Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply

    I think this is a great prompt! I especially loved the part where you didn't explained why your friend quit. This is an example of life really, since we had a friend who did that.

    Good job! ^_^


    The crazy bubbly shadow

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    Rachmaninoff

    Otaku Legend | Posted 06/12/08 | Reply

    If I wasn't so busy, I'd consider doing that as well. Nice work, especially the open ended aspect of the ending.

    -Darren

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    Aaryanna

    Otaku Legend | Posted 06/11/08 | Reply

    You did a nice job with the prompt. ^_^ I probably should give it a try too. heh.

    ~*Aaryanna*~

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    Sabrina

    Otaku Archangel | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply

    @NightBeck:

    Thank you for participating! I hope I see you again! :D

    You're welcome! ^_^ And thanks for taking the time to read what I did for the workshop. I'll be watching for more of them.

    -Sabrina

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    Sabrina

    Otaku Archangel | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply

    @SomeGuy:

    Aside from the comma errors in the second sentence I have no qualms with this from a mechanical point of view.

    I'm always glad to hear about mistakes. >_> I make so many of them! So thanks for pointing that out. ^_^

    -Sabrina

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    Sabrina

    Otaku Archangel | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply

    @Indi:

    I've thought about doing it, but after all the writing I had to do for school... My first thought is No Way In Hell!

    I figured it would help me be more creative for the rpg's at OB. Heh.

    -Sabrina

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    NightBeck

    Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply

    I'm with SomeGuy - negative attitudes make me sad! Writing for school is different from writing for yourself. *pouts*

    Anyways, onto your piece! I could definitely relate to the narrator here; I've had a lot of friends suddenly "quit" on me, without any explanation. I like very much that you left it open-ended rather than trying to explain the friend's behavior, because most of us never know.

    Thank you for participating! I hope I see you again! :D

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    SomeGuy

    Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply

    Aww, Crystia's got a negative attitude . . . we need to fix that some time.

    I like how you were able to get your story out even in just four paragraphs. Also, I think this kind of disappearance is something we've all seen at some point in life, especially with the online world the way it is now; we all have old friends we wonder about, right?

    Aside from the comma errors in the second sentence I have no qualms with this from a mechanical point of view. From a creative, I have absolutely no problems.

    Thanks for playing!

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    Indi

    Dr. Mama Cat. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply

    So you've been dragged into the madness! :p I've thought about doing it, but after all the writing I had to do for school... My first thought is No Way In Hell!

    You did a nice job with the prompt by the way.

    ~Crystia