Wow, this is a neat intro! Can't wait to read more! Continue, plz!!! :D
At first, when you were describing the main character, I was all, "WHAT?!" because, I have a character who is ostracized for his white hair and two different colored eyes. Only, one eye is blue and the other is RED, so... :P Nice work! It hooked me!
Mine's here, if you're interested... don't feel obligated to read it. XD I shall wait for more updates! :3
TheDarkAngel
Pathetic Diabetic (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 04/22/09 | Reply
Wow, this is a neat intro! Can't wait to read more! Continue, plz!!! :D
At first, when you were describing the main character, I was all, "WHAT?!" because, I have a character who is ostracized for his white hair and two different colored eyes. Only, one eye is blue and the other is RED, so... :P Nice work! It hooked me!
Mine's here, if you're interested... don't feel obligated to read it. XD I shall wait for more updates! :3
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