Imma cri now!!! that was so sad!!!! i liked it tho. KEEP WRITING or ill sue u. ^_^ but seriusly. keep writing.

-Saki Akasuna

Yoni: poor kyuubi that's almost the same as my life except i didn't make any friends until i was 13
me: ya well some people are lucky but still poor kyuubi!

Shukaku:...I can't believe Teme was so like that. If I was a girl, I would've date him.

Jess:It's so beautiful!*hugs Kyuubi*

~Jess
~Shukaku

the lack of cohesiveness and consistent verb tense is like a punch to the cerebrum.

@Summer Daydream:

I say around this time would be fine. Kyuubi's off trying to find somthing to get rid of the darkside of his, so he has spare time

Hachi and Soji: *fighting over who gets the emo corner*
Soji: that is so sad!
Hachi: GIVE ME MY FRICKIN EMO CORNER WOMAN!

D: I feel sad now... ;_____; It's kinda something some of us can relate to in some way. ):

Hey... um... Off subject here, but... When should Asuka present herself to Kyuubi, or should she do that at all? :O *Shot for asking an idiotic question after an awesome story* D:

me:That was soo sad.........at least Gray found him..

oh mi goodness... thats so sad...
poor todd... poor kyuubi... why are parents so crude to their cursed young? its so horrible...