I've noticed a lot of lag in the storyline, and most of it is due to writer's block. 
so I'm just writing a little short-ish part, but it will be written on-the-spot, so if its crappy, tell me, kay? 
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My eye twitched as i saw what dutch turned into. A giant whale? Come on!! How original... Well, that's one dark down... And... How many to go? I had no idea.
hmmm... I wonder where Alistar went after I passed out in the cave. and where's Lobos? I wanted to look for them. I asked Dark Koumori if she could help me.
"It might work better if we split up," she said. That was fine with me. A strange object caught my eye. When I picked it up, I couldn't tell what it was, but there were several others. I started picking them up, and I found a river. Just inside the riverbed was another object, but it was clean, and had no dirt. I finally could tell that it looked like a wooden carving of a carp fish.
Strange..., I thought. What would something like this be doing out here? Then I noticed that the eyes of the carving were made out of some sort of gem. It was a dark maroon colour.
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...yeah, i know, its really sloppy, isn't it? 
i cant really remember the inspiration for this... 
~Kou Carp
Ok so switching back to Koumori's view.
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I don't remember even throwing up again. When my eyes opened, I was in some place that I didn't even know about. Suddenly, Dark Dutch called out,
"Hey D. Shukaku, how you been?" I was a bit surprised, and looked at the person he was talking to. when I did, the "dark" winked at me and smiled.
"Oh I'm alright. Just ready to kill after I had been resting. Let me scare this prey before we kill her." He suggested. Now I was really freaked out. They brought me here to kill me?! When Dark Dutch nodded, he dragged me out, covering my mouth with his hand.
"Before you scream, I want to let you know that I'm on your side. The real me can control the darkness for now. Just leave now. Kyuubi will be waiting for you." So... this was the real Shukaku? Or another trick? I didn't want to trust him, but I just nodded and left as fast as I could.
I ran into Dark Koumori on my way. "What are you doing here?!" I was getting panicked. I thought she had been locked somewhere in the hotel...
"Relax, I felt the presence of those other Darks, and came over." I could tell she was just trying to calm me down, but I let her. I didn't want to be worried right mow. When we got to the boat, kyuuibi looked really mad that Dark Koumori was with me.
"Save the theatrics for later. She's on our side. Right now, you should find Shukaku. I think he's gonna try to fight D. Kyuuibi." I pointed toward the strange place.
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I continued one of shukaku's posts. the "title" of the post is a true fact. it's really hard to keep up. 
~Worried Kou
This post will be written in Dark Koumori's veiw. Don't ask me why. It just is. Now, ON WITH THE STORY!!!!!!! 0.o
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I could sense their chakra. A new dark was here. And a new one was waking up. I ground my teeth together, feeling so helpless. I saw some bijus getting into a boat. I had been locked in the hotel room, but I figured I would just climb out the window. When the air rushed in, I felt so free. There was no need to sneak into the boat, as was my original plan. I jumped and let my wings come out. Following the boat, I saw it was headed towards the dark's presence.
ON THE ISLAND
I was getting irritated. I heard the new dark say something about Dark Kyuuibi. So, Orochimaru was working for him all along. I didn't care if I got in trouble. As soon as Yoni went away, I jumped out of the tree I was in, and spoke to the two darks.
"What the hell is going on here? And I want the whole story."
"You must be the 'good' one we've been hearing about," Dark Dutch sneered at me.
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Yeah, since I can't think of how to continue the part about Koumori being sick, I wrote this. It's really short, I know. 
~Dark Kou
"Kyuuibi-san..." Even though I spoke quietly, he heard me.
When he turned around and said, "Yes? You need anything? Is everything fine?"
I was about to explain everything, when Alistar suddenly said-- no, shouted is more appropriate-- "HEY!! Dutch! Kyuuibi!"
I hung my head, knowing there was a waterfall of questions coming. "couldn't you have kept your mouth shut a while longer?" I moaned.
"Nope."
"Who is this?" Dutch demanded, "And how does he know our names?"
I opened my mouth to speak, but again, he cut in. "Oh, I accidentally attacked Kokoro. I was in this cave earlier, and thought she was something else." Jeez, did he have to take this so frickin lightly?! It was getting on my nerves!
I think I might of started to hyperventilate, or maybe forgot to breathe. I was starting to get lightheaded. Ugh. Not again. "Uh, maybe we should go back to the hotel?" The tone in my voice made it sound like a question, but Dutch shot out of the cave the moment I suggested it. Great.
I saw a bat out of the corner of my eye. Not just one bat, but an entire colony. A lighter spot distracted me, and I saw a little baby bat with its mother and father. It reminded me of how I got my name... No. this was no time for flashbacks. Focusing again, I tried to make myself look as calm as possible... Without success.
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...yeah, i think koumori means 'bat' in Japanese, or in some language. >>
~Batty Kou
When I turned to face Alistar, he suddenly seemed nervous about something. Anyone else might have passed over it without a thought, but I knew him too well.
"Spit it out! What's bothering you?" I said through my teeth. His reply didn't even shock me at all, but I WAS pissed at him.
"Well...I was the one who attacked Kokoro... I was trying to act angry before so you couldn't tell... I thought she was something else." He shrugged like we were discussing the outcome of a football game. A loud snarl escaped my throat. "But I seriously didn't mean for her to get hurt like that!"
Again, through my teeth: "Why does it matter what your motives were? She almost died!"
"Why the hell do you even care what happens to her? To any of them?! What have they done for you?!"
I snorted. "That's crazy. Why does it matter? But I guess I have to explain anyway..." Having a flashback, those painful memories flooding his mind as well... I had a strange power of telepathy.
Once again, shock crossed his face, with a hint of pain in his expression. "Oh..."
"Yeah. When I came here, I was able to get my priorities straight. I can't really explain it..." I turned halfway to the side, not wanting to look at him.
Sighing, I said, "I guess I have to take you to Kyubbi..."
"Who?"
Annoyed again, I clenched my hands into fists to keep from snapping his neck. "Just come on!"
When I finally found Kyubbi, he was with Dutch. This made me a bit more reluctant to talk, but I had to.
I gulped. "Kyubbi-san..."
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...yup. random.
~twitchy kou
