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    Dill pickle

    Senior Otaku | Posted 03/05/09 | Reply

    my writing is beyond terrible
    but yah i thinking of some major editing if we get a new computer like we are planing on

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    Silver Phoenix

    Senior Otaku | Posted 03/05/09 | Reply

    haha wow, great stuff! love the guys' expressions when Kai walks in :]
    your writing's a bit hard to read - maybe do a bit of editing and use a manga font for it?
    just a suggestion. looks brilliant :D please continue!!