@kisskiss-bangbang:

Yeah, That would be fun to draw some of the characters. lol I should reminded him that we even did that story. lol We have both been doing our own things lately.

@wolfpupable:

Me too

i like this pic

Aa..sure! We exchange story through PMs!!! :D

@ecnelisterger:

Yeah, Thank you. I am glad you like them. This is really cool how we are making a story. and it is all through comments. lol But you really are good at this. and In a sense it is helping me come up with stuff too. I am usually the one who comes up with something odd, and then my cousin turns it into something genius. It feels great to be on the other side of that pendulum. Thanks. If you would like we can still work on this. The only thing is we live on different sides of the world. So we would have to work on it all on the internet. So If you would like to continue to work on this with me. I think we should move it to the inbox. or we would be revealing all the information on this comment aria.

You don't have to if you don't want to.

But I sure am enjoying it.
and thanks again

@mickyodragon:

They're awesome characters! Great idea!
And the very orphans the angels met will teaches her how to be happy despite of having unfortunate life!

@ecnelisterger:

Interesting, I would have never thought of it that way, but it makes the story all the richer if you do it that way. It sets up the reader for a war approaching. And also mixed emotions on the one who tore off her wings, and through her to earth. Nice.

So after she is on earth, she would be super depressed, and full of anger. So she should meet a human that is vary carefree, that may have been through a lot as well. But all ways is happy. Also maybe another character who is vary quiet, and always follows the happy character. And in a sense watches out for them.
Maybe they are both orphans, who were abandoned during a war that the humans have been in for a long time.

What do you think?

@mickyodragon:

Hehe...I watch too many anime, manga and fantasy movies...
Well, let's just said the traitor didn't want her to get killed, so he tore her wings apart, sending her falling down to human world...the traitor had no grudge against her, only to the 'elders' in the heaven. The elders gives out obnoxious orders to benefits themselves and that's why some angels form alliances against the 'elders', and called themselves as 'Fallen Angel'...

@ecnelisterger:

Great!!!! that sounds Awesome. You are really good at this E-san!! The concept of her being betrayed is great. The only thing thats got me is how would she have escaped? did the top bad fallen just let her go to live in despair. Or should there be more to it then that. And how would she meet the others later on. I am drawing a blank.

Oh sorry I haven't answered you sooner.
Work has been long lately.

@mickyodragon:

I'm not sure, but the idea of 'hunter-angel' suddenly came up..:D
But maybe yes, you could say that she's hunting for demon, but how about we say that 'Hunter-Angel' hunted the 'Fallen Angel', it's like angel versus angel, but the other side were traitors to heaven.
And her wings were torn apart by one of her comrades, which she trusted so much and which happen to be a spy from the 'Fallen Angel' side..
how's that?

@ecnelisterger:

What do you mean by hunter angel? I am just curious.And We need to come up with a good event of how she lost her wings. And yeah meeting some odd characters along the way would be great!!! We need to come up with a good reason why she came down in the first place too. Maybe a hunt, but for what?????? Pondering,Pondering...... Was she hunting for a certain Demon? and the devil showed up, and then defeated her. And sense she couldn't get away. He tore her wings off so she couldn't go back to heaven as a way to make her suffer from the separation. Ohhh this just keeps getting better and better.

Keep coming up with Ideas E-san!!!

Ohhh and She is in the church Because the demons can't reach her there.

@mickyodragon:

Or she's a hunter Angel who had lost her wings and in order for her to return to the heaven, she must find her lost wing~ and she'll meet some humans with different attitudes? :D

@ecnelisterger:

LoL yeah, But I think the look on her face takes away that theory. Ohhh maybe she was just in a battle where she lost her wings. Ohh maybe she is bad and her soul was in her wings so now she is like a puppet without a soul trying to put the pieces of her soul back together. So I guess she could have been a hunter maybe.
That sounded really good!!! I could maybe make a story about that.

@mickyodragon:

Yeah, cool atmosphere, but may also lead into something mysterious...maybe she isn't what she seems, maybe she's a hunter taking shelter...:D
Crazy imagination~

@Shizuki12:

Me too There is a certain Aww that surrounds them.

@ecnelisterger:

Yeah, All alone trying to get back on her feet maybe. She also looks lost. The old abandoned church makes a cool atmosphere too.

Very beautiful scenery!!! Abandoned churches always makes me felt so mystified!

You can say that she's lost or abandoned by her guardian...a picture that makes us wonder, if you ask me...