I will read this later I can't now I am to sick to read it. And 1 hour and 30 minutes do u mean a nap? I slept the day away and I am still being sick sucks.
I'm going to give you some constructive criticism.
1. Break up that block of text into paragraphs. It's easier to read and the correct format. If you don't know how, I can give you tips.
2. Add more detail. Give some background. It gives life to the story.
3. Always proof and make sure everything is grammatically correct.
EnvyScarlet
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/23/12 | Reply
Just read it and I am confused.
Kuzusu
Otakuite+ | Posted 02/22/12 | Reply
@DemonsandAngels:
Ah ok....Thanks for the tips.
EnvyScarlet
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/22/12 | Reply
I will read this later I can't now I am to sick to read it. And 1 hour and 30 minutes do u mean a nap? I slept the day away and I am still being sick sucks.
DemonsandAngels
Beautiful Disaster (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/22/12 | Reply
I'm going to give you some constructive criticism.
1. Break up that block of text into paragraphs. It's easier to read and the correct format. If you don't know how, I can give you tips.
2. Add more detail. Give some background. It gives life to the story.
3. Always proof and make sure everything is grammatically correct.