:] Thank you for your criticism. I fully understand what you're saying and where you're coming from, but I wrote this having in mind that this journal entry could really apply to alot of the characters in the show. In no way did I want to imply that I didn't care and that I didn't put time and effort into this. And if it DID come off that way, eek, I need to brush up on my writing then. I just didn't want to narrow it down to a right and wrong answer. Because technically (in my eyes anyways) there isn't a right or wrong answer.
Really though, I could probably go on forever and a day about personalities. But I'll just cut to the point. My view on people's "personalities" is what people normally show to us is acting. For example, I really don't think it would be realistic if Naruto pranced around all day like a hyper bunny on crack. None of us really know what any of their personalities are like. We just see what's on the surface, but what's underneath is much more complex. I know...Naruto is an anime show, not a reality show...but I thought it would be interesting to try to make the characters more relatable to everybody. FAIL. At least I tried. ^^;
:] Thank you for not sugar coating fluff on fluff. We all need a critic in our lives. Cute cat, by the way. I've seen that icon somewhere else...Ah well, I'll figure it out.
Ehh. Bad concept, then. If you're going to write someone's journal, you have to actually have their personality in mind. Otherwise there is no purpose to the sketch, and the only way to redeem value is to play the Relative card, which tastes pretty foul on my tongue.
Leaving the narrator vague is a legitimate concept, but saying "it's whoever you think it is" is basically saying "I didn't feel like taking the time to decide who was narrating". That's like offering someone a shepherd's pie and then leaving out the meat and half the vegetables.
ManaTatsumiya
Otakuite+ | Posted 08/22/09 | Reply
I thought either Naruto or Hinata, and I reckon the 'star' part either refers to Naruto if it's Hinata, or Sakura if it's Naruto.
sailormoon4376
Otakuite+ | Posted 01/22/09 | Reply
I think it's Naruto too
Akatsuki16member
Otakuite | Posted 01/21/09 | Reply
i think its either sai or hinata
PuffPuppy
Otakuite | Posted 10/04/08 | Reply
I dunno...to me, Naruto kinda comes to my mind...after so much, who knows what goes through his head.
sesshy.uber.rad
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/02/08 | Reply
@Allamorph:
:] Thank you for your criticism. I fully understand what you're saying and where you're coming from, but I wrote this having in mind that this journal entry could really apply to alot of the characters in the show. In no way did I want to imply that I didn't care and that I didn't put time and effort into this. And if it DID come off that way, eek, I need to brush up on my writing then. I just didn't want to narrow it down to a right and wrong answer. Because technically (in my eyes anyways) there isn't a right or wrong answer.
Really though, I could probably go on forever and a day about personalities. But I'll just cut to the point. My view on people's "personalities" is what people normally show to us is acting. For example, I really don't think it would be realistic if Naruto pranced around all day like a hyper bunny on crack. None of us really know what any of their personalities are like. We just see what's on the surface, but what's underneath is much more complex. I know...Naruto is an anime show, not a reality show...but I thought it would be interesting to try to make the characters more relatable to everybody. FAIL. At least I tried. ^^;
:] Thank you for not sugar coating fluff on fluff. We all need a critic in our lives. Cute cat, by the way. I've seen that icon somewhere else...Ah well, I'll figure it out.
Allamorph
Spiritus Memorae (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/02/08 | Reply
@sesshy.uber.rad:
Ehh. Bad concept, then. If you're going to write someone's journal, you have to actually have their personality in mind. Otherwise there is no purpose to the sketch, and the only way to redeem value is to play the Relative card, which tastes pretty foul on my tongue.
Leaving the narrator vague is a legitimate concept, but saying "it's whoever you think it is" is basically saying "I didn't feel like taking the time to decide who was narrating". That's like offering someone a shepherd's pie and then leaving out the meat and half the vegetables.
SaxGirl
Music Fairy (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/02/08 | Reply
I thought Hinata too!:P
Good story!^____^ *hugs*
~SG
sesshy.uber.rad
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/01/08 | Reply
@:
There is no right or wrong answer. It's just..how do YOU interpret it? Hinata is a good answer. ^^
Ookami.Miko
Otakuite+ | Posted 10/01/08 | Reply
Hmm..the first person that pops into my head is Sai. xD I don't know why.Maybe it was the artist part,I suppose >.>