Ohhhh I never realized that the P.I. and "Hank"/Same were the same. >.< I was just like "Oh... random guy... who knows everything... o.O XL XL XL OH GOD." But now everything makes sense xD Thanks for the clarification :D EVERYTHING IS DIFFERENT NOW. In a good way.
In your defense, it wasn't really explicitly stated in the post. I just had some "Hank the detective" stuff, but I never specified who the mysterious phone call was from. I should've had Ash look at the caller ID or something. M'bad. xD
Oh, wooow. *_* You are very good at writing. The sentence structure and the detail is just awesome. I'm also pretty excited to be here when stuff is happening. Yay stuff! c:
Thank you so much for getting Bridgette to the club. I wasn't sure what I was going to do, but now I have ideas! Yay again!
I can't wait to see what happens now. O_O
The only real problem I see with this is that they aren't supposed to know Sam was the one sending the messages. Tommy only knows him as Hank. xD SAM IS STILL SUPPOSED TO BE AMBIGUOUSLY EVIL
but, i mean, you're one of the leaders... derp /flees
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WyvernWings
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
@MashMadness:
Ohhhh I never realized that the P.I. and "Hank"/Same were the same. >.< I was just like "Oh... random guy... who knows everything... o.O XL XL XL OH GOD." But now everything makes sense xD Thanks for the clarification :D EVERYTHING IS DIFFERENT NOW. In a good way.
WyvernWings
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
@WindSorceress32:
You're so kind; thank you! <3 hehehe yes you came at a good time xD
My pleasure. I was hoping that was okay but left it open just in case. :3 Yay!!
Hehehehe things will get interesting. I hope. xD
MashMadness
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
@WyvernWings:
In your defense, it wasn't really explicitly stated in the post. I just had some "Hank the detective" stuff, but I never specified who the mysterious phone call was from. I should've had Ash look at the caller ID or something. M'bad. xD
WindSorceress32
Otakuite++ | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
Oh, wooow. *_* You are very good at writing. The sentence structure and the detail is just awesome. I'm also pretty excited to be here when stuff is happening. Yay stuff! c:
Thank you so much for getting Bridgette to the club. I wasn't sure what I was going to do, but now I have ideas! Yay again!
I can't wait to see what happens now. O_O
WyvernWings
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
@KeybladeMewKasa:
o.O Oh my. I've read that three times. Curse my mind.
YES INDEED WOOT
KeybladeMewKasa
SHSL Lamebutt (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
@WyvernWings:
Well, I mean Mash's post had it. xD
BUT YAY PLOT DEVELOPMENT
WyvernWings
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
@MashMadness:
YOU'RE TOO NICE GAH. SERIOUSLY
I am fixing it now xD
WyvernWings
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
@KeybladeMewKasa:
o.O gack. Sorry. I wasn't aware of this. No one... no one told me >.< I'll fix it right up xD
WyvernWings
Otaku Legend | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
@:
FIELD TRIP YAY EVEN THOUGH IT'S FORCED XD
Oh heavens, thanks you. ^-^ I'm glad even though this was er not um... good. xD
Oh my goodness. New idea for adventures with Griffy. Because this needs to happen
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harvestmoonluvr
HARVEST GODDESS (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
@:
can we please do that? XL will never find us there...
MashMadness
Otaku Eternal | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
Pshaw, it doesn't suck at all. It's quite good, as always. Even your so-called "horrible" writing is superb, yo.
Like Kasa said, the Sam/Hank thing is the only inconsistency. D:
Of course, I love the Ash parts. :D
KeybladeMewKasa
SHSL Lamebutt (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 02/26/13 | Reply
The only real problem I see with this is that they aren't supposed to know Sam was the one sending the messages. Tommy only knows him as Hank. xD
SAM IS STILL SUPPOSED TO BE AMBIGUOUSLY EVILbut, i mean, you're one of the leaders... derp /flees
Last edited by KeybladeMewKasa at 4:35:44 PM EST on February 26, 2013.