Yeah! I'm like that too, I can totally overlook an issue so thats why its great to have another's opinion on it :)
Thats ok too, I like that you can colour and draw without lines cuz it turns out pretty cool!
No problem! I'll be sure to post here soon, I'd love to get advice too! (once I start drawing again xD)
Ah yes I see what you mean with the arm pit clothing! It totally makes sense, but I have to spot it first. Also yes I already noticed I was abit sloppy with the edges. I think that I might come back to this piece after two weeks or so (I have to take some distance from it). Rofl you like the eyes? Hmm well I'm unsure about it what my opinion actually is xD I can see why it might look odd, but on the other hand they also attract more attention. I think i'll stick to the realism style a bit more though.. Good to hear you like it though. Thanks so much for th tips! I'm surprise and super happy people already responded and helped me out :D
More color or simply more depth? I did the backgroud pretty quick and I didn't have much inspiration on what to do. But I see why color would be better --> for the balance of the picture. Thank you for the tip Karmira :D
Thank you so much for your feedback! I'll probably have to choose next time between realism and anime. Not a combination of both :3 It's just that I find line art difficult to do digitally haha :P
AH I love how you posted this critique!! Its very neat! Proves even more how awesome this world is, eeeee I love it and can't wait to get more involved! ^U^
Ok I hope I can help with some observations (even tho I love how you drew Shyla^^)
Anatomy looks good, but because of her perspective and the way she is sitting, you wouldn't see the back side of her blue shirt (right artpit area). By adding the blue section, it makes her shoulder not line up and her side too wide, u see? Make it more like the left artpit/shirt!
Lineless is neat! But maybe for this one, you could clean up the edges a bit more so its extremely smooth. The smooth perimeter helps lineless look cleaner.
I actually like the eyes very much! I think the size of them leans more to anime style though. Making them smaller would be more realistic, but I also think that would take away from her face (her eyes are so beautifully attractive!)
Btw I really love how you did her legs and arms, shading is very good and the tough perspective looks easy! xD You did great!
Ok, so I really love it all and all, but the eyes look a little unreallistic. The proportions/anatomy are good and the highlights and everything else look good, but the eyes just look odd.
Last edited by madalinehatter at 9:07:13 AM EST on November 7, 2013.
madalinehatter
Senior Otaku | Posted 11/23/13 | Reply
@Aryia:
Your welcome, and its okay. :D
Aryia
Grand Otaku | Posted 11/23/13 | Reply
@madalinehatter:
Thank you! Sorry for the late reply ^^; :3
madalinehatter
Senior Otaku | Posted 11/09/13 | Reply
@Aryia:
Your welcome!! I realy like how you posed her, so cute!!! Hope to see more work by you soon.
Last edited by madalinehatter at 1:01:09 PM EST on November 9, 2013.
MangaKid
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/08/13 | Reply
@Aryia:
Yeah! I'm like that too, I can totally overlook an issue so thats why its great to have another's opinion on it :)
Thats ok too, I like that you can colour and draw without lines cuz it turns out pretty cool!
No problem! I'll be sure to post here soon, I'd love to get advice too! (once I start drawing again xD)
Aryia
Grand Otaku | Posted 11/08/13 | Reply
@MangaKid:
Ah yes I see what you mean with the arm pit clothing! It totally makes sense, but I have to spot it first. Also yes I already noticed I was abit sloppy with the edges. I think that I might come back to this piece after two weeks or so (I have to take some distance from it). Rofl you like the eyes? Hmm well I'm unsure about it what my opinion actually is xD I can see why it might look odd, but on the other hand they also attract more attention. I think i'll stick to the realism style a bit more though.. Good to hear you like it though. Thanks so much for th tips! I'm surprise and super happy people already responded and helped me out :D
Aryia
Grand Otaku | Posted 11/08/13 | Reply
@Karmira:
More color or simply more depth? I did the backgroud pretty quick and I didn't have much inspiration on what to do. But I see why color would be better --> for the balance of the picture. Thank you for the tip Karmira :D
Aryia
Grand Otaku | Posted 11/08/13 | Reply
@madalinehatter:
Thank you so much for your feedback! I'll probably have to choose next time between realism and anime. Not a combination of both :3 It's just that I find line art difficult to do digitally haha :P
much appreciated! ;D
MangaKid
Otaku Legend | Posted 11/08/13 | Reply
AH I love how you posted this critique!! Its very neat! Proves even more how awesome this world is, eeeee I love it and can't wait to get more involved! ^U^
Ok I hope I can help with some observations (even tho I love how you drew Shyla^^)
Anatomy looks good, but because of her perspective and the way she is sitting, you wouldn't see the back side of her blue shirt (right artpit area). By adding the blue section, it makes her shoulder not line up and her side too wide, u see? Make it more like the left artpit/shirt!
Lineless is neat! But maybe for this one, you could clean up the edges a bit more so its extremely smooth. The smooth perimeter helps lineless look cleaner.
I actually like the eyes very much! I think the size of them leans more to anime style though. Making them smaller would be more realistic, but I also think that would take away from her face (her eyes are so beautifully attractive!)
Btw I really love how you did her legs and arms, shading is very good and the tough perspective looks easy! xD You did great!
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 11/07/13 | Reply
I'm not a very good person to critique fan art. It's been ages since I have made any, but a part of me would like to see more color in the background.
madalinehatter
Senior Otaku | Posted 11/07/13 | Reply
Ok, so I really love it all and all, but the eyes look a little unreallistic. The proportions/anatomy are good and the highlights and everything else look good, but the eyes just look odd.
Last edited by madalinehatter at 9:07:13 AM EST on November 7, 2013.