thanks!! I'll have to check out your story... I had a blast writing this! looking forward to finishing it.
finger prints aren't what you really need to worry about. DNA is. you know how easy it is to leave hair or tiny flakes of skin behind? the human body sheds those constantly. and this story is science fiction- it takes place in the future, so there are all kinds of high-tech investigation tools to make sure that if a tiny hair falls between the floorboards, it won't be overlooked. lol, trust me, if the killer left anything behind in that dorm room, the investigators would have found it. there was just nothing there. *creepy Twilight Zone music*
it wasn't suicide, that much I can tell you. they can tell by examining the body whether the gunshot wound was self-inflicted. there are only so many angles you can shoot yourself at, you know? and unless you have extendable arms, you can only shoot yourself at close range. so no, not suicide. good guess though!
Cole's mother is a real piece of work, isn't she? there are sooo many things messed up with that woman...
yeah, I'm glad for my cat. she keeps me warm at night, lol.
thanks for reading!! keep checking back in, I don't know how long it's going to take to finish it. I might've done it tonight, but my dad wanted to watch a movie. he brought home burgers, and it doesn't matter how many mints I have, my breath still smells like onions. eewwww... he drained 2 hours out of my life and I had to eat onion-y burgers just because it would've hurt his feelings if I hadn't eaten what he brought me... oh, well. lol... back to work now...
This was great!
I'm working on a murder story also! I loved this!
That murder must be really good to leave NO finger prints behind also.
Or maybe it was suicide?
Poor cole, that was sad, his mother scares me. =___=
neko Misty kitten
Grand Otaku | Posted 07/14/09 | Reply
thanks!! I'll have to check out your story... I had a blast writing this! looking forward to finishing it.
finger prints aren't what you really need to worry about. DNA is. you know how easy it is to leave hair or tiny flakes of skin behind? the human body sheds those constantly. and this story is science fiction- it takes place in the future, so there are all kinds of high-tech investigation tools to make sure that if a tiny hair falls between the floorboards, it won't be overlooked. lol, trust me, if the killer left anything behind in that dorm room, the investigators would have found it. there was just nothing there. *creepy Twilight Zone music*
it wasn't suicide, that much I can tell you. they can tell by examining the body whether the gunshot wound was self-inflicted. there are only so many angles you can shoot yourself at, you know? and unless you have extendable arms, you can only shoot yourself at close range. so no, not suicide. good guess though!
Cole's mother is a real piece of work, isn't she? there are sooo many things messed up with that woman...
yeah, I'm glad for my cat. she keeps me warm at night, lol.
thanks for reading!! keep checking back in, I don't know how long it's going to take to finish it. I might've done it tonight, but my dad wanted to watch a movie. he brought home burgers, and it doesn't matter how many mints I have, my breath still smells like onions. eewwww... he drained 2 hours out of my life and I had to eat onion-y burgers just because it would've hurt his feelings if I hadn't eaten what he brought me... oh, well. lol... back to work now...
Creme Of Rolo
Senior Otaku+ | Posted 07/13/09 | Reply
This was great!
I'm working on a murder story also! I loved this!
That murder must be really good to leave NO finger prints behind also.
Or maybe it was suicide?
Poor cole, that was sad, his mother scares me. =___=
GOOD JOB!
Lucky, you can snuggle your cat.