Wow. I didn't think my writing meant that much to you. I only do this because there's nothing I can do in my spare time besides writing. Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot to me!
I'm glad to hear!
On a deeper note, I really like Grimm's characterization, because we're always learning something new about him. This was a fun little interaction to see since he's usually spending his page time with the new members of the Stitchez in "A Safe Place."
I really like your style of writing, I can't really put my finger on what it is about it, but it's just super readable yet mysterious. I personally think a character like Grimm is hard to write well, because his personality is one that is a fine balance of several elements, and I think it can make for an irritating character if it's written poorly (I struggle with this when I write), but you write him super well and he's great! (my fave!)
There's a lot to your stories that are different in a really good way from a lot of the personal stories I've read in my days. I think you just have fresh ideas and you present them in a way that's fun yet has serious undertones. Personally I like how the characters aren't goody-goodies or whiners (which seem to be the mass majority of characters in recent literature), I think it adds more dimension — you write in a way that gives your characters very distinct personalities and that's what makes it fun. Nobody's the same and they're not afraid of that, and it really brings the story to life!
DON'T STOP WRITING!
Last edited by envythejealous at 8:29:24 PM EDT on October 11, 2016.
envythejealous
It's "hello," sir. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/12/16 | Reply
@DarlingV:
You're welcome, I mean every word!
DarlingV
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/11/16 | Reply
@envythejealous:
Wow. I didn't think my writing meant that much to you. I only do this because there's nothing I can do in my spare time besides writing. Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot to me!
envythejealous
It's "hello," sir. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/11/16 | Reply
@DarlingV:
I'm glad to hear!
On a deeper note, I really like Grimm's characterization, because we're always learning something new about him. This was a fun little interaction to see since he's usually spending his page time with the new members of the Stitchez in "A Safe Place."
I really like your style of writing, I can't really put my finger on what it is about it, but it's just super readable yet mysterious. I personally think a character like Grimm is hard to write well, because his personality is one that is a fine balance of several elements, and I think it can make for an irritating character if it's written poorly (I struggle with this when I write), but you write him super well and he's great! (my fave!)
There's a lot to your stories that are different in a really good way from a lot of the personal stories I've read in my days. I think you just have fresh ideas and you present them in a way that's fun yet has serious undertones. Personally I like how the characters aren't goody-goodies or whiners (which seem to be the mass majority of characters in recent literature), I think it adds more dimension — you write in a way that gives your characters very distinct personalities and that's what makes it fun. Nobody's the same and they're not afraid of that, and it really brings the story to life!
DON'T STOP WRITING!
Last edited by envythejealous at 8:29:24 PM EDT on October 11, 2016.
DarlingV
Otakuite++ | Posted 10/11/16 | Reply
@envythejealous:
I'm making more soon! I don't really have motivation, but comments like these make me want to write! Thank you!
envythejealous
It's "hello," sir. (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 10/11/16 | Reply
This is really funny! I'd love to read more!