=D i didn't know you were an awesome writer ... ahaha great story! it was unique and your writing style is really professional. i wanted to see what a 'world' was like so i dropped by yours, only to find your amazing stories ;D
^_^ Wow, what a sweet story! And the pairing is very different from the other fanfics I read, I like it a lot! =) You used a great deal of detail, which was easy for me to imagine. Two things I would suggest though is use maybe a few more commas in your sentences and also not use "she" as much, but other than that I thought it was very good! ^_^ It made me have a very warm feeling when I read it, incredibly sweet and a feeling that you are never alone in your troubled; even someone like Inuyasha will be there to cheer you up! XD lol.
Great job Stixx! ^_^ You do have a way with words, so keep it up! I hope to see more fanfics from you soon! *hugs*
kawaiixkukkii
Otakuite | Posted 07/16/08 | Reply
=D i didn't know you were an awesome writer ... ahaha great story! it was unique and your writing style is really professional. i wanted to see what a 'world' was like so i dropped by yours, only to find your amazing stories ;D
Kaerlyn
Tea pixie (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
I'm going insane... I read your title as 'Relient K +' ... >_< i'll read the thing propperly now...
moonshine7
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
another great story! ^^ good job!
innocent heart
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
^_^ Wow, what a sweet story! And the pairing is very different from the other fanfics I read, I like it a lot! =) You used a great deal of detail, which was easy for me to imagine. Two things I would suggest though is use maybe a few more commas in your sentences and also not use "she" as much, but other than that I thought it was very good! ^_^ It made me have a very warm feeling when I read it, incredibly sweet and a feeling that you are never alone in your troubled; even someone like Inuyasha will be there to cheer you up! XD lol.
Great job Stixx! ^_^ You do have a way with words, so keep it up! I hope to see more fanfics from you soon! *hugs*
DeidaraNarutoClan
Hot and Cold (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/10/08 | Reply
I think that was very good. Your writings are awesome... I honestly am not that good... Although I try my best
~Deidara