Oh really? o_O Never thought much about those genre's lol xD
I started writing a while ago actually, when I started I wrote FMA fanfics most of the time. But they were sooo bad lol xD I'm happy with the way my writings are coming out now :'3
Hmm..now that you think about it, psychological genre sounds good :'3 The characters are playing alot of mind games >: D
Yeah, I also like the crazy twist in your story. ^^ I think you're not a simple minded writer because if you were, you wouldn't have come up with a story this interesting. No matter how common the scenes or concepts are, as long as you get the interest of the readers, you can say you're a good writer. Since when did you start writing your own stories BTW?
Action and sci-fi only? I think mystery and psychological genres are also involved in your story. ^^
Errm...It's Action/Sci-Fi :'3
I'm not sure what you mean about their dialogue xD I had thought long and hard about how to write the dialogue and that's how I pictured it to begin with : P
I guess I'm just a simple-minded writer? xD Anyways, I'm pleased with the way their dialogue looks to me, but yeah their meeting is kinda common ; 3
But I like crazy twists in my stories -^_^-
Wow.. Your introduction was awesome. X3 You stated clearly what you had in mind - the setting and the rankings. Although some scenes and concept are common, Zethus and Damali's meeting gave off an attractive plot. Try to think more unique lines on their conversations and make their adventure as vast as the universe. ^^ BTW, what are the genres of this story? Action, Sci-fi, mecha, mystery? Please state them so that the readers would know. ^^ Great job on the first chapter. Goodluck! X3
Tama Takasu
Otakuite | Posted 04/14/09 | Reply
Oh really? o_O Never thought much about those genre's lol xD
I started writing a while ago actually, when I started I wrote FMA fanfics most of the time. But they were sooo bad lol xD I'm happy with the way my writings are coming out now :'3
Hmm..now that you think about it, psychological genre sounds good :'3 The characters are playing alot of mind games >: D
krizomet
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/14/09 | Reply
@Tama Takasu:
Yeah, I also like the crazy twist in your story. ^^ I think you're not a simple minded writer because if you were, you wouldn't have come up with a story this interesting. No matter how common the scenes or concepts are, as long as you get the interest of the readers, you can say you're a good writer. Since when did you start writing your own stories BTW?
Action and sci-fi only? I think mystery and psychological genres are also involved in your story. ^^
Tama Takasu
Otakuite | Posted 04/13/09 | Reply
Errm...It's Action/Sci-Fi :'3
I'm not sure what you mean about their dialogue xD I had thought long and hard about how to write the dialogue and that's how I pictured it to begin with : P
I guess I'm just a simple-minded writer? xD Anyways, I'm pleased with the way their dialogue looks to me, but yeah their meeting is kinda common ; 3
But I like crazy twists in my stories -^_^-
-TK
krizomet
Otaku Eternal | Posted 04/13/09 | Reply
Wow.. Your introduction was awesome. X3 You stated clearly what you had in mind - the setting and the rankings. Although some scenes and concept are common, Zethus and Damali's meeting gave off an attractive plot. Try to think more unique lines on their conversations and make their adventure as vast as the universe. ^^ BTW, what are the genres of this story? Action, Sci-fi, mecha, mystery? Please state them so that the readers would know. ^^ Great job on the first chapter. Goodluck! X3