I've made a few minor adjustments to it. Really just grammatical errors. I churned that bastard out in ten minutes for a writing challenge, so the spelling looked like I just graduated second grade when I was done.I like to believe that the update column really likes my work, and tries to push it on others.
And, may I just say, I think it's sad that you don't allow your Pokemon to simply be "it". Don't you think it's up to the Pokemon to decide if they don't want a specific sex? Have we learned nothing from Jynx?
Somehow I knew you would be the one to wade through my post.
That post-apocalyptic Hulk thing you've got going on keeps appearing in my updates. Are you making significant changes to it, or posting then deleting those posts...?
btw, love it. You're so smart, I wish I could write like that.
And no, my depravity knows no end. I will refer to the genderless as 'he' and 'she' however it pleases me to do so.
VenusGuyTrap
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/05/09 | Reply
@Flint:
There are two things I must reveal unto you..even if it pains me.
1. I continue to find the mistakes every time I read the short.
2. Jynx is decidedly female.
Flint
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/05/09 | Reply
@VenusGuyTrap:
I've made a few minor adjustments to it. Really just grammatical errors. I churned that bastard out in ten minutes for a writing challenge, so the spelling looked like I just graduated second grade when I was done.I like to believe that the update column really likes my work, and tries to push it on others.
And, may I just say, I think it's sad that you don't allow your Pokemon to simply be "it". Don't you think it's up to the Pokemon to decide if they don't want a specific sex? Have we learned nothing from Jynx?
VenusGuyTrap
Otaku Legend | Posted 06/05/09 | Reply
@Flint:
Somehow I knew you would be the one to wade through my post.
That post-apocalyptic Hulk thing you've got going on keeps appearing in my updates. Are you making significant changes to it, or posting then deleting those posts...?
btw, love it. You're so smart, I wish I could write like that.
And no, my depravity knows no end. I will refer to the genderless as 'he' and 'she' however it pleases me to do so.
Flint
Senior Otaku | Posted 06/05/09 | Reply
NO gender specification?! Is there no end to your depravity, woman?!