Transient Rain (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/21/09 | Reply
@Stixx:
Thank you!!! ^^ Iam glad you noticed my light satire! I really enjoy writing humorous stories with almost dark undertones... lol!
Grand Otaku | Posted 05/21/09 | Reply
Very interesting. I like the humor, but also the subtle messages. Really, what would be the point to panic and throw yourself into a frenzy when it doesn't do any good. I like the old man. Too bad I couldn't share his cake.
Transient Rain (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/20/09 | Reply
@Karmira:
Thanks alot! ^^ Iam glad you liked it!
@wallpaperotaku:
In my defense I wrote it early in the mourning! lol I've gone through and corrected the typos I found! Thanks for the comment Wall-E!
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/20/09 | Reply
He he! Aurora this is hilarious!! I'm going to read this one again for sure. Good luck in the contest!
The Hero of Time (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/20/09 | Reply
lol. Aurora this was great! A few typos here and there but wonderfully entertaining. Lets bake a cake sometime!
tsubasachro
Transient Rain (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/21/09 | Reply
@Stixx:
Thank you!!! ^^
Iam glad you noticed my light satire! I really enjoy writing humorous stories with almost dark undertones... lol!
Stixx
Grand Otaku | Posted 05/21/09 | Reply
Very interesting. I like the humor, but also the subtle messages. Really, what would be the point to panic and throw yourself into a frenzy when it doesn't do any good. I like the old man. Too bad I couldn't share his cake.
tsubasachro
Transient Rain (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/20/09 | Reply
@Karmira:
Thanks alot! ^^
Iam glad you liked it!
tsubasachro
Transient Rain (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/20/09 | Reply
@wallpaperotaku:
In my defense I wrote it early in the mourning! lol
I've gone through and corrected the typos I found!
Thanks for the comment Wall-E!
Karmira
The Dreamer (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/20/09 | Reply
He he! Aurora this is hilarious!! I'm going to read this one again for sure.
Good luck in the contest!
wallpaperotaku
The Hero of Time (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 05/20/09 | Reply
lol. Aurora this was great! A few typos here and there but wonderfully entertaining. Lets bake a cake sometime!