Okay ppls, I had an idea recently for a song that is currently being written by me. Tell me what you think.

"I Want To Cry All The Pain Away" *verse 1*The love that you once showed meHas slowly faded away.Because she came along, she won,and stole it all away.It hurts, the way you treat me now,saying how it'll all be okay.I want to talk to you, it's true,but you won't let me find the words to say.*chorus*I was hurting from the beginning,it feels like there's nothing to say.If I lock myself in the darkness,then I can cry the pain away.I never thought it would happen,me yearning for you each day.I want to make myself numb on the inside,I want to cry all the pain away.*verse 2*A physical relationship,a love that is a lie.I hate you for the things we do.How dare you ask me "why?"The pain that comes from being with you,the hurt that grows inside...I wish I could be left alone...I wish that I could die...!*chorus* *bridge*Tell me, where the Hell did we go wrong?I thought you loved me, but that love's not strong.She only touched you once that dreadful day,I can't believe it's all slipping away...

I still need to write the third verse and second chorus, but...anyway...