So I'm thinking the title makes sense now. Then again, I'm probably wrong. Who knows! But I like Chloe and can sense the redhead trend continuing.
Though I have to say, I think writing in the present tense is a bit distracting. It sounds like it should be a script when written this way, and if so, then broken down considerably. Writing with past-tense flows in the brain a lot better.
Carney
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/29/10 | Reply
@Katana:
I always have problems with tenses and it pisses me off because I can never get it down. Or I constantly switch.
And of course I have to go with a redhead. They've got spunk and fire and well she's very Irish...
Katana
Goggalor (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 07/29/10 | Reply
So I'm thinking the title makes sense now. Then again, I'm probably wrong. Who knows! But I like Chloe and can sense the redhead trend continuing.
Though I have to say, I think writing in the present tense is a bit distracting. It sounds like it should be a script when written this way, and if so, then broken down considerably. Writing with past-tense flows in the brain a lot better.
"In Kat's wor we trust."