Oh I see!! I don't think I've read that reason yet, but maybe it is in the prologue... I read the prologue earlier before starting the chapters! I'll double check and I'll also keep reading to learn more^^
Yeah, I like to pour a lot of detail when it comes into characters for some reason. Though I did change Leanne's clothes from what I have drawn. I was supposed to re-draw them both because my current pictures of them are really old and bad. And thats ok, I love critisism, much more than positive comments. I dont know if I explained it in the prologue or not, or in upcoming chapters, but theres a reason to why they arent really all that sad about it.
I like the descriptions in this chapter!! It answers lots of my questions that were starting to build up! I have a clear picture of what they look like based on your detailed descriptions (and I can also check out your drawings of them!) Your ideas are brilliant! I think if there's one thing missing, its a little bit of sorrow from Leanne and Luna... They seem excited to leave which is ok, but they don't seem shocked or anything. AH I feel bad for criticizing! Please let me know if you mind or not! Your story is very good, I'm enjoying it!!
MangaKid
Otaku Legend | Posted 03/10/12 | Reply
@sasuke sarutobi4:
Oh I see!! I don't think I've read that reason yet, but maybe it is in the prologue... I read the prologue earlier before starting the chapters! I'll double check and I'll also keep reading to learn more^^
sasuke sarutobi4
Otaku Eternal | Posted 03/09/12 | Reply
@MangaKid:
Yeah, I like to pour a lot of detail when it comes into characters for some reason. Though I did change Leanne's clothes from what I have drawn. I was supposed to re-draw them both because my current pictures of them are really old and bad. And thats ok, I love critisism, much more than positive comments. I dont know if I explained it in the prologue or not, or in upcoming chapters, but theres a reason to why they arent really all that sad about it.
MangaKid
Otaku Legend | Posted 03/09/12 | Reply
I like the descriptions in this chapter!! It answers lots of my questions that were starting to build up! I have a clear picture of what they look like based on your detailed descriptions (and I can also check out your drawings of them!) Your ideas are brilliant! I think if there's one thing missing, its a little bit of sorrow from Leanne and Luna... They seem excited to leave which is ok, but they don't seem shocked or anything. AH I feel bad for criticizing! Please let me know if you mind or not! Your story is very good, I'm enjoying it!!