Ohhhh, that was awesome enough, I'd say. That is pretty wild, though, to have lightning wake you up - I've never had lightning strike that close to where I live before.
Anyway, I really had a feel for your personality in this little write-up. I liked that; it made what could have otherwise been a very straight-forward response into something a little more special.
From a technical standpoint, the main thing would just be some little spelling things here and there (mostly just the "lightning" bits). I don't have any big gripes with anything else.
I'm not that awesome with writing or ideas unless it's BAM (now that's starting to gradually get old)
I don't really know how exactly close it was to the house but the first thunder shook the house. It wasn't raining strangely.. Here they would call it heat lightening but there wouldn't be thunder if it was that so I don't know if it just wasn't raining where we lived or what. I remember I was downstairs on the couch before the thunder but then after I went upstairs. I don't ever watch the weather channel so I wasn't expecting it but I really can't remember the last time there was lightening and thunder. Not little thunder I mean where it shakes the house and wakes you up. I love that kind... we do not seem to get it anymore. (I failed the contracting of words lesson..) The rest of my family slept straight through it some how. Mom wakes up from Bill snoring but not from something that shakes the house. Strange..
A friend of mine slept through murder (with gun fire) next door to his apartment. Gah i don't think i know anyone worse then that haha
For some reason I love lightening and thunder. It's different from other times because it's nothing people can control. Most people wouldn't enjoy that but I do. I love nature over man made things..
We cause too many problems. Lightening corrects what we do because it turns the CO2 into.. i want to say ammonia but i'm not 100% sure.
How close was the thunder and lightning to you? How much did it rain?
What were you doing when it happened? Were you expecting the storm?
How did the rest of your family handle it? Or did they not care at all?
Last time I had chills I didn't enjoy them; how come you loved these ones?
Sabrina
Otaku Archangel | Posted 06/17/08 | Reply
Time for another one! The only way to get better is to practice.^^ I hope. Hehe. ^_^
Rain
-Sabrina
TimeChaser
Madman With a Box (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/16/08 | Reply
Prompt is finished. So there. =P
Bazinga!
somegirl
Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
@SomeGuy:
Thanks for saying James. That really means a lot.
Is it too cold for lightening where you are?
somegirl
Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
@TimeChaser:
Ready and waiting!
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
@somegirl:
Ohhhh, that was awesome enough, I'd say. That is pretty wild, though, to have lightning wake you up - I've never had lightning strike that close to where I live before.
Anyway, I really had a feel for your personality in this little write-up. I liked that; it made what could have otherwise been a very straight-forward response into something a little more special.
From a technical standpoint, the main thing would just be some little spelling things here and there (mostly just the "lightning" bits). I don't have any big gripes with anything else.
Nice little story there!
TimeChaser
Madman With a Box (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
To all those who teased me about never working on a prompt before, well I'm doing it right now! Nya nya! XD
Bazinga!
Kimmeh
The Beautiful German | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
Because rain in Arizona is pretty awesome.
Decided to link it this time because it's pretty long.
I obviously chose the storm one. And this one doesn't seem as good as the last. Maybe, meh. I don't know.
"This is Schweinsteiger fashion. ZIS IZ FASHUNN."
somegirl
Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
@SomeGuy:
I'm not that awesome with writing or ideas unless it's BAM (now that's starting to gradually get old)
I don't really know how exactly close it was to the house but the first thunder shook the house. It wasn't raining strangely.. Here they would call it heat lightening but there wouldn't be thunder if it was that so I don't know if it just wasn't raining where we lived or what. I remember I was downstairs on the couch before the thunder but then after I went upstairs. I don't ever watch the weather channel so I wasn't expecting it but I really can't remember the last time there was lightening and thunder. Not little thunder I mean where it shakes the house and wakes you up. I love that kind... we do not seem to get it anymore. (I failed the contracting of words lesson..) The rest of my family slept straight through it some how. Mom wakes up from Bill snoring but not from something that shakes the house. Strange..
A friend of mine slept through murder (with gun fire) next door to his apartment. Gah i don't think i know anyone worse then that haha
For some reason I love lightening and thunder. It's different from other times because it's nothing people can control. Most people wouldn't enjoy that but I do. I love nature over man made things..
We cause too many problems. Lightening corrects what we do because it turns the CO2 into.. i want to say ammonia but i'm not 100% sure.
SomeGuy
Canadian Liaison (Team) | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
@somegirl:
How close was the thunder and lightning to you? How much did it rain?
What were you doing when it happened? Were you expecting the storm?
How did the rest of your family handle it? Or did they not care at all?
Last time I had chills I didn't enjoy them; how come you loved these ones?
Just curious, is all . . .
NightBeck
Otaku Eternal | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
My response this week!
somegirl
Bossman's Wife (Otaku Eternal) | Posted 06/15/08 | Reply
Kimmeh and James were always good writers.
Oo the last rainstorm was wonderful! xD It gave me chills because there was so much thunder and lightening! I loved it