Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/19/09 | Reply
@Faroe:
Yes, thats it. Its kind of based on real events, so the people involved would understand it better, but you've got the idea.
Senior Otaku | Posted 07/18/09 | Reply
It did Rhyme a little. It was good though. What was it about? I kinda got a thought that it was about two people starting a friendship, then relationship, then marriage and growing old together. Or was I way off? *laughs*
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/17/09 | Reply
@SirLawliet:
Thank you. Love tends to make one optimistic. hehe
Well, it ryhmes, at least, its supposed to. LOL
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/17/09 | Reply
Very symbolic. :)I look at the concept more than anything of any art....yes, poetry is a form of art, and the optimism of this was well done.
Senior Otaku | Posted 07/17/09 | Reply
Well, this is a well constructed poem. But is it a free verse or is it a rhyme scheme?
DragonRider11
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/19/09 | Reply
@Faroe:
Yes, thats it. Its kind of based on real events, so the people involved would understand it better, but you've got the idea.
Faroe
Senior Otaku | Posted 07/18/09 | Reply
It did Rhyme a little. It was good though. What was it about? I kinda got a thought that it was about two people starting a friendship, then relationship, then marriage and growing old together. Or was I way off? *laughs*
DragonRider11
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/17/09 | Reply
@SirLawliet:
Thank you. Love tends to make one optimistic. hehe
DragonRider11
Otaku Eternal | Posted 07/17/09 | Reply
@Faroe:
Well, it ryhmes, at least, its supposed to. LOL
SirLawliet
Otaku Legend | Posted 07/17/09 | Reply
Very symbolic. :)I look at the concept more than anything of any art....yes, poetry is a form of art, and the optimism of this was well done.
Faroe
Senior Otaku | Posted 07/17/09 | Reply
Well, this is a well constructed poem. But is it a free verse or is it a rhyme scheme?