These are just bits and pieces of things I wrote, and need advice on, or never finished. I do have a few guest posters on here as well. The main idea, is to get your work out, so as to get tips on how to improve. Please comment on the work, if you have an opinion of any kind, good or bad.

Also, if you have any question on my work, or would like to become a guest poster, just PM me. I do write on request sometimes, so don't hesitate to let me know if you wanna see something in particular.

Jealousy

Jealousy I saw him talking to her at the mall. I saw her perfect curve, creamy tan, long, blonde hair and full lips. I saw the way he looked at her, with his eyes full of love and caring. I wanted to walk up and slap her. How dare she talk ...

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Letting Go.

This was the response to a prompt from another site, and is unedited. However, I would still like comments and crituques. Thanks. I started to get up, twisiting around...

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