oh.my.freaking.gawd.O.O.i wuz hooked since the first word and oh jee, that was insanely deep. poor evan D: at least he was sorta kinda happy at teh end :) bai now?
D': The only reason why I'm so good at this is because I was a nerd when I was younger and all I ever did was read .___." I took a freaking class on writing, too xD So don't feel bad!!
Trust me, this was like...the fourth draft that I did! When I was putting it up here, I noticed SO many small typos and mistakes and I was like "MUST FIIIIIIIIX" xD It was kind of funny...
Don't worry, I can't write like THIS unless I'm EXTREMLY in the mood and EXTREMELY inspired...just so happened that I was when I wrote this x3
Glad you like it<3 But don't stop writing!! You can always improve!! 8D Remember the words that I used, for example xD They spice up the writing!
Oh wow, I made you CRY!? Sheesh o__O" I never knew that...my writing could have that effect on people!! I'm really glad that you liked it...I worked SUPER hard on the darn thing, haha...
But yeah, I'm moved that you enjoyed it...it means a lot to hear feedback like that from people--usually I'm so insecure, haaha.
Anyway! Thank you very much again! Hopefully I can put more things on here..I don't get to write much anymore, sadly..But I'll see what I can put up! Though I doubt it'll be as good as this xD
Wow. That was... I almost can't find words adequate enough for that. It was really deep, and intense, and so, SO good. It made me cry in the beginning, gave me chills, and made me cry again at the end. And believe many, very little things have the power to make me cry like that in literature or movies.
I can understand entirely why your teacher wanted a copy of this. Hell, when I get home I'm probably going to print this thing out, or at least save it to my hard drive. I can't wait to read more stuff from you, that's for sure.
PerfectParadox
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
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xD <3333 Thaaaaanks
Lizinator03
Otaku Legend | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
oh.my.freaking.gawd.O.O.i wuz hooked since the first word and oh jee, that was insanely deep. poor evan D: at least he was sorta kinda happy at teh end :) bai now?
PerfectParadox
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
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Nooo! <33 Keep writing my sweet!! <333
D': The only reason why I'm so good at this is because I was a nerd when I was younger and all I ever did was read .___." I took a freaking class on writing, too xD So don't feel bad!!
Trust me, this was like...the fourth draft that I did! When I was putting it up here, I noticed SO many small typos and mistakes and I was like "MUST FIIIIIIIIX" xD It was kind of funny...
Don't worry, I can't write like THIS unless I'm EXTREMLY in the mood and EXTREMELY inspired...just so happened that I was when I wrote this x3
Glad you like it<3 But don't stop writing!! You can always improve!! 8D Remember the words that I used, for example xD They spice up the writing!
<3 <3 <3
~~PerfaPox
PerfectParadox
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
@Kyrianne:
Oh wow, I made you CRY!? Sheesh o__O" I never knew that...my writing could have that effect on people!! I'm really glad that you liked it...I worked SUPER hard on the darn thing, haha...
But yeah, I'm moved that you enjoyed it...it means a lot to hear feedback like that from people--usually I'm so insecure, haaha.
Anyway! Thank you very much again! Hopefully I can put more things on here..I don't get to write much anymore, sadly..But I'll see what I can put up! Though I doubt it'll be as good as this xD
~~PerfaPox
Kyrianne
Otaku Eternal | Posted 10/16/08 | Reply
Wow. That was... I almost can't find words adequate enough for that. It was really deep, and intense, and so, SO good. It made me cry in the beginning, gave me chills, and made me cry again at the end. And believe many, very little things have the power to make me cry like that in literature or movies.
I can understand entirely why your teacher wanted a copy of this. Hell, when I get home I'm probably going to print this thing out, or at least save it to my hard drive. I can't wait to read more stuff from you, that's for sure.
Kyrianne