I'm glad you're happy with your changes. Smoothed over a few of the plot holes. yay backstory and motive, but now I wondering what Hiei did to YuYu that's hurt her as reaper can see...and if he wants Hiei to suffer for hurting her...what is his definition of hurting because then he's a hipocrite, at least I consider the chains and tightening to be hurting. So I wonder whats makes this Reaper guy tick.