Drip
Drip
Drip
The rain
drenching the alter,
beautiful pale silk cloths
stained with crimson
layed on the floor.
Roses were scattered around,
their petals all
ripped up.
There she was,
drenched.
Drip
Drip
Drip
Her elegant dress
created with the finest cloth and roses,
sewn together with the
most beautiful threads
by the most skilled taylors.
Her make-up
melted off her face.
Her boquet of the brightest flowers of the earth
stolen of their colors as
she wept quietly.
A knife held to her throat
waiting for blood to quench it's
thirst.
The man behind her
clenched the knife and grinned,
"You may now kill the bride."

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xD A poem based off the style Karen Hesse uses in Out of the Dust that I wrote in free-write today in Language arts. We had to write a scary story. but my teacher told us not to make it all gory and bloody(Darn. D':) so I settled with this. I asked her to read it and she said it was good. xD

anyway, i liked the poem so much I wanted to make a picture out of it~! I messed up terribly though. >___> my coloring sucks too. if it wasn't for my experimenting with effects, it would've looked much worse. xD

I thought it looked cool with my shadings added. but I thought the lineart looked cool too. P:
so what do you guys think? it this version better or this version?

Anyway, pretty much the groom kills everyone at an outdoor wedding
and leaves the bride for last
....SORRY I COULDN'T THINK OF ANYTHING ELSE TO WRITE ABOUT! D:
lmao

oh yea, since a lot of ppl dont' really comment on my WORLDS or MyO, I'm just going to say it here so that i'm sure more ppl will know.
I have volleyball tornament(we're going to fail. I know it, my team is filled with brats that argue D:) tomorrow and I have to be there at 9:15 AM and will be back at around 2 PM maybe in Pacific central time. So, I'll be gone pretty much most of the day. so i'll probably miss a lot of updates. ^^"
So yea, just a heads up. ^^ wish me luck! i hope that my team at least makes it to the championships.

uhhhhhhhh yeaa I think that's about it. ^^
Please hug and comment~ means a lot. ^^
Have a very happy halloween everyone! Jaa ne!