Ok well I had this image for a while but I never knew what to do with it until now but I still dont like it ^^'

and I hope I spelt everything right but I know not alot of people know how to read harigana(sp?)

Well I was also trying to get something like a smoke look but I dont know how to do that with paint shop pro T__T though I wish I did...

Well tell me what you guys think!!