So I've been a bit frustrated creatively lately. Although I've been trying to make wallpapers and all, it just hasn't been coming out. Yes, I'm complaining, but I just need to let it out. I've been working on an Iphone wallie for the last few days and I just can't seem to get it to come out. Here's what I have so far:

I have the idea to make it look like he's broken the glass and all, but I just feel like it isn't coming out right? Any chance anyone can offer any input or advice??? I really wanted to to make this work out