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Naruto awoke facing Kyuubi's gate. Kyuubi himself seemed asleep, so not to disturb him and get yelled at, he tried to sneak away when he bump into something. A tall man was standing there he had very blank eyes and seemed lifeless. " Who are you? How did you get in here."
The man said nothing and started walking towards another gate. He felt Naruto following him so he turned and stared calmly at Naruto. "Please don't follow me. I will treat you as a threat to yourself." The man spoke in such a way Naruto realized he wasn't a real man.
"What are you? Tell me that much at least." Naruto said with his arms folded and staring at a puddle of water.
"I am no one. I am only a defense mechanism. I am only here to assist you. The fourth left me here for your protection from yourself and Kyuubi. I am only like a thumb print. I may look, talk, walk and even act like him, but i am not the fourth Hokage." He said sounding grumpy.
THE REST WILL BE ADDED ALONG WITH A PICTURE LATER TODAY OR TOMORROW. SORRY
IT was a cloudy day. naruto had been trying to ignore the pain in his chest for weeks but now it was unbareable. "I have to go see granny or my chest will blow up." he said as he hurried out his front door. he was hurring through town when he bumped someone.
"where are you going?"said a kind voice he recongized.
It was shino who, as usual, was covered from head to toe. Naruto didn't realize who it was for a second. "O its just you, shino. I'm on my way to see granny. wanna come?" naruto asked grabbing his chest.
Shino noticed the clench and pushed something into naruto's hand. "Here. Hinata said to invite to her picnic party on saturaday. You had better get well and come or i'll have kiba send akamaru after you." With that scarely warning, he turned away from Naruto and walked away.
Naruto was a little shocked. He then yelled after Shino" Who the hell do you think you ar...ARGH!" He fell to the floor still clenching his chest.'Its getting worse. Gotta get to granny's quick or i'll die..." Naruto collasped in the middle of the road as the rain started.
Naruto awoke in his mind. the dark corridors seemed to quiet. exacty the water had just frozen in spot as if time had stopped. As he walked his foots echoed but he still heard the ones behind him." Who's there?! Show yourself coward!"
There was no response to Naruto's resquest, so he just ingored it and keep walking. Once he got to Kyuubi's chamber he gasped. Kyuubi had been frozen in time. " Hey Kyuubi...are you ok?" When he touched the bars, he heard snickering.
When he turned around, he was staring at his himself as a child. "Who...no..What are you?" he said shivering just a bit.
".......I'm you........and all your hate.."It said in a evil way. he had a clock in his hand, his finger was holding the second hand."All i want to say is....i'm everything you fear and hate..one day you will release me..one day." With that it diappeared and time seemed to start again.
will add rest of part one soon...srry
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