Hello!!
I am tehmekemonster! If you are looking for random tidbits and words you've come to the right place! You can read as much as you want of that here! Feel free to tell me what you think of all of it too! Writing it doesn't do me any good if no one tells me how it could be better!!
have fun, okay?
how can i discribe fanfiction? fanfiction is like a big muddy river, there is so much wrong with it anything good about it gets muddled and covered up. so i compiled a few pointers i think will help you turn your fic into that one gem of the fanfic world. here we go
1: i cannot stress enough the importance of a non-mary sue being your OC. if you use an OC in your fanfic. if you don't think you know what a "mary sue" is you may have seen one already. a mary sue is perfect and has the world bend around them, a mary sue is almost always the fault of the writer. one way to avoid making a mary sue is to avoid making an OC or any character you create like yourself. you'll want all the skills and all the advantages and you are the writer so why not right? because no one like them, they make a story boring not interesting. trust me!
2: a horrible backstory doesn't make your character better, it's hard to read a story when it's angsty protagonist makes you want to punch yourself in the face. a hard life is no excuse for your character, just like with real people they can't be all bad.
3: there was once a saying "the eyes are the windows to the soul" and they can be, but be careful with the "their eyes hold sorrow" and the like. it sounds poetic sure, but if you do that with every character it will get old.(and almost everyone does so try to avoid it)
4: super poetic writing is like raw suger, if you use too much your writing gets grainy and sickening. eww. if you always use it try telling instead of discribing
and that's all for today thanks for reading
so i looked up the history behind all hallows eve. it isn't based off of a pagan religion, it's based off of the catholic religion and it celebrates the lost of loved ones, and how much fun they must be having in heaven without us, isn't that cool?
i also looked up a few superstions about halloween, if it's catholic then where did all the worrisome tales of sprits and ghosts come from? that's the real question, you see christians aren't supposed to believe in luck or superstitions of any kind. no witchcraft, no fortune-telling, not even good or bad luck, why would an origninally catholic holiday have so much evil satanic and pagan conotation?! and why are people so scared? isn' fun to be frightened? even if it's just once a year.....?
If there is one thing I love in this world it's parties. You can't hate giant parties. Dancing, sweets, fun of all kinds. This summer there was a pool party, on a roof, which was really great because it was breezy, sunny and had an excellent view. There were tons of people there, not much food but swimming was really great in such warm weather. I wasn't much of a swimmer so part way through the festivities I sat out on my towel. I stared up at the clouds, feeling a little left out and a little hungry too.
Suddenly there was a scream from behind me. Shrieks filled the air, I whiped around. Everyone had their eyes on me, what was going on? "Get her downstairs!" "Quick!"
I just went with it and I was about to jump up and run downstairs when Ben ran over and hoisted me up "calm down I got it!" He shouted and hopped in the elevator.
He pressed the down button but he didn't let me down. I just sat there a bit akwardly. I didn't know ben all that well but it was always apparent that he was strong enough to pick me up. I just stared at him creepily for a while. It was a really tall building but as soon as the elevator door opened Ben was running me off to god knows where.
Honestly how can you not love a good party?
And that is what come up with when I think for too long.
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