My comment: Render is good. But the overall wallpaper is meh.
There are a lot of empty unused usable places. You need to maximize spaces in order to make good looking wallpapers. But when I say maximizing space, I don't mean to put things in all empty spaces. But put things in places that NEED to be filled.
The gradient looks a little too dark for the whole "feel" of this wallpaper. You can't see any color err combos.
But good job though.
Rating:
Difference in style---------------- 16%
Creativity------------------------- 13%
Originality------------------------ 16%
Beauty----------------------------- 14%
Clearness-------------------------- 26%
Total------------------------------ 85%
Congratulations!