Story Ideas?

So recently I've been thinking over my BAHD story (Blood of Angels, Heart of Demons, the story Ryo and most of my characters come from). I wrote it a long time ago, and the writing sucks since I've improved my writing skills since. XP

But even so, it's been suggested to me that I post it here anyways. Any thoughts about it? I would prefer someday going back and re-writing it first, but eh, I dunno when if ever that'll be.

Suggestions?

If all else fails, maybe I'll just post some random clips to show my lameish skills as a writer XD