Hi again (I really need to play catchup, don't I?)

Here's my picture for day 4's theme, which was to redraw your first submission to theOtaku. Well, I redrew it (see the original here), but I can't say it improved.

For one thing, I decided to go about drawing this in a completely different way, given that I was trying to match the original artist's style the first time, so digital coloring on the computer and everything I did before might make it look too similar. So I used marker and colored pencil to color it, as well as no rulers or straight line tools.

The result? Eh... I need to work on my marker coloring.

And the translations are as follows: "Smoked cheese" (the crossed-out part) and "Please take away" (thanks jisho.org!)