AGH! Firefox just crashed on me. And I was almost done with my description. Great. So, I'll sum it up.
After taking everyone's advice, I got rid of the red text on the right side of the wall, and I added another texture overlaying the characters instead of just bokeh. It looks a lot better.
I had to cut out all the gray spaces between the characters and paste them again to have it where the font would over lay them, but not the characters. That took forever.
This took a total of 5+ hours, with a total of 98 layers but I'm pleased with the result. I hope everyone else likes it, too.
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